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AGE: 56
LOC: Independence, MO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: February 24

  i want honest comments on my writing and the real deal on publication. do i have  anthing going for me or is some one playing a rude joke?
seriously, how can 5668 people read a journal and rarely leave a comment? it’s lots of the same people too, the footprint guide says so.

i’m going to publish, whether some one picks me up pr i go broke. i have to prove to my son that you finish what you start.

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O Great Father of Love, Help me to deal with all the circumstances of this life with the hand of faith, and make my faith sure. Give me the faith that believes where I cannot understand, the faith that sees what these eyes see not, the faith that knows what the mind is ignorant of. Make me more and more aware that evil comes not from Thee but from the abscence of Thee.   And so i pray for a greater faith in Thee, a faith that goes on where there is no going. a faith which sees accomplish...
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O Great Father of Love, Help me to deal with all the circumstances of this life with the hand of faith, and make my faith sure. Give me the faith that believes where I cannot understand, the faith that sees what these eyes see not, the faith that knows what the mind is ignorant of. Make me more and more aware that evil comes not from Thee but from the abscence of Thee.   And so i pray for a greater faith in Thee, a faith that goes on where there is no going. a faith which sees accomplish...
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there was a time when this is all i cared for... the almighty dollar and what it could buy. my son had the best.... the best that i could afford. but where was i when he got his first job? at 7 years old, ferrying packages from one store front to the next. he started out with numbers tickets and moved up quickly in the ranks. the sharpest, fastest bike on the block. until one day someone tried to stop his bike with a car. THEN i was there. self righteous and loud until i counted the money he ...
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Lyrics / come to Jesus
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come to jesus can't you hear me calling you child. all the old faces are becoming crystal clear. i am passing on the stories to a stranger that i love, cause there's nobody left at home to hear. come to jesus all my sisters and friends. light the candles and sing me a song. the time i knew was coming, well it's finally here. i'm going but i wont' be gone for long. i'm gone to jesus and it's not quiet, it's not dark just a place to rest my pack and sing my songs. and if you're a bit afraid i'l...
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Poetry / the feast
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the feast lies before me today as it did the day before. this is not a dream. i touch things that smell and taste things that are not vapors. 'attention walmart shoppers..we are closing for the day' echos through the aisles. i exit thru the silent glass door. it will come again, the lights the aisles the echo, and i will be here. "attention walmart shoppers" and the feast begins. flrk2009/mylethia70(05)©
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Poetry / Corporate
there is a lot of movement in this poem. almost turning into a corporate spider. with 'Chins up, in neatly pressed clothes draped over shapeless forms, Overstuffed with spoils and excesses that would make a glutton ashamed.' one body, one head, overstuffed bellies and spindly legs. your monster comes to life as a raider without conscience. i enjoyed your poem at both readings.
Short Story / New York Minute
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Blurb from Do you remember me?
i don't usually approve of using a womans pain and fear as grounds for entertainment.having said that, here goes.you hold the key to good story.  the what happens next is only the opener.how deep into the belly of beast are you willing to go?how many of the 7 deadly sins will you break and how elaborately and cunningly unique is the pain?how close to madness can the main character come and still be vital?mostly can you do it in the confines of the mind without resorting to gore?you see that i...
Poetry / granite
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Poetry / Unearthly Eyes
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