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I love your style of writing as well and you obviously have a wide range of vocabulary which shows through in this piece. I can't really see any grammatical errors but then I am not a qualified critic..lol. All I would say is do not be discouraged by bad reviews as I think you are onto something here. Keep up the good work and please send me a message anytime you post any new material as I would love to read more of this.

Good use of punctuation, grammer and you're extensive range of vocab is evident here. Like the story and I think you have something good here so don't be discouraged by any bad reviews you may have had just make sure that you keep wtiying ok. Keep up the good work xx

Liked the story and definately like your style of writing. There are a few minor problems with a few spellings and grammer but on the whole I loved it.Would love to read some more