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My name is Ethan Caster. I am a normal teenager, except in the next days to come. That's when things change. A lot. But first, I'm going to tell you a little about myself. I'm 16, I don't do drugs, and I don't know it all. Enough about me though, you're just here for the story I am going to tell you. Waking up is not one of my strong points. I usually hit the snooze button a few times after my alarm goes off. At 6:15 I do what I always do. I reset the damn thing for 6:35 and go back to sleep....
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Chapter Two La Fuga (the getaway in Spanish, French, Italian, and Portugese) The door did not open with a peaceful push. I could hear the wood splinter in a thousand different pieces as the door jam gave way to whatever had opened it. My heart, overcome by the amount of adrenaline I was producing, seemed to stop at that very moment. Time seized to move. I had to do something fast, or I was on my way to jail…or worse… was it the men on the street? Whoever they were, the outcome of me staying h...
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oh baby dont you see we are a thousand miles away but we dont want to become casualties of eternity so lets say what we really mean and put this thing we call distance to an end oh baby dont you see why cant it just be you and me? but now baby dont cry but just let love bring you closer to me
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it is dense reading in the best of ways. i thought of the best classics such as Thoreau. i had to read this piece more than once to grasp its full meaning, in any other text this should spell disaster, with the exception of something as deep rooted as this. there is not a whole lot that can be critiqued when a expression feels like it has been lifted directly from the mind, yet maybe a longer version can be used to describe the compact thoughts presented here.
not bad at all for a first go. I this is a critique though, so i will point out something i just did not quite get. in the second verse "now I’ll stand up and applaud" kind of threw me off. maybe find another way to integrate it, or toss it, otherwise it steals away from the rest of the eb and flow.
awesome. I feel like i just got done watching one of those CNN special reports where they tell you absolutely nothing by telling you something, i do mean this in the best of ways of course. i do remember the Texas fires that occurred a year or so ago, yet it now feels like the perfect example of how perfectly useless news networks are. i just realized this off of reading this one, very true poem. keep being obvious about how stupid the obvious can be, its a weird kind of eye opener.
as i began to read the second part of the piece i wondered wether or not i was reading a piece on philosophy or of self motivation. by the end however, i realized it was both. as a matter of fact i knew it was a piece about self motivation as soon as i read the thoreau quote. dont get me wrong, american individualist liturature such as thoreau is great, but i think americans are ready for a philisophical feel that draws froma more forgin inspiration, and less from ourselfs. after all, inspir...
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