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AGE: 32
LOC: Opelika, AL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: May 31

I am an up and coming author with my first book Keepin’ It Tight releasing February 2007! My writing style crosses genres with a theme of romance with erotica sprinkled in with suspense and drama.

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Version 4
3 Reviews   1 Comment
Chapter 1 He's Mine Sunbeams burst through the red velvet curtains stirring Lela from her sleep. She gently peeled back the red silk sheets that entangled her body. Her eyes instinctively fixed on the empty space beside her in her bed, the spot that belonged to her beau, Ty. Tyrese Whitman. His full name dancing across her mind sent a sweet tingle down her spine. Lela Whitman, she delighted at the thought. They lived together for the past year and last week out of the blue Ty popped the quest...
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Version 3
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Chapter 1 He's Mine Sunbeams burst through the red velvet curtains stirring Lela from her sleep. She gently peeled back the red silk sheets that entangled her body. Her eyes instinctively fixed on the empty space beside her in her bed, the spot that belonged to her beau, Ty. Tyrese Whitman. His full name dancing across her mind sent a sweet tingle down her spine. Lela Whitman, she delighted at the thought. They lived together for the past year and last week out of the blue Ty popped the quest...
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Version 2
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Chapter 1 He's Mine Sunbeams burst through the red velvet curtains stirring Lela from her sleep. She gently peeled back the red silk sheets that entangled her body. Her eyes instinctively fixed on the empty space beside her in her bed, the spot that belonged to her beau, Ty. Tyrese Whitman. His full name dancing across her mind sent a sweet tingle down her spine. Lela Whitman, she delighted at the thought. They lived together for the past year and last week out of the blue Ty popped the quest...
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Version 1
0 Reviews   0 Comments
Chapter 1 He's Mine Sunbeams burst through the red velvet curtains stirring Lela from her sleep. She gently peeled back the red silk sheets that entangled her body. Her eyes instinctively fixed on the empty space beside her in her bed, the spot that belonged to her beau, Ty. Tyrese Whitman. His full name dancing across her mind sent a sweet tingle down her spine. Lela Whitman, she delighted at the thought. They lived together for the past year and last week out of the blue Ty popped the quest...
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Version 1
6 Reviews   4 Comments
Lela hung up the phone with a big smile pasted on her face. Though Neil had just given her the news that he would be out of town all week on business, he knew just what to say to satisfy her. During the past six months they only made love three times and each time had been special. What they shared more than anything was passion; passion for life; passion for hopes and dreams; passion for each other. The 200-plus mile separation and Antwan being with them on most of their dates were the main ...
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Poetry / EvAnEsCeNcE
I kept an open mind, and this poem actually puts you in the park with this woman and tells a vivid story. However, I am only able to see page one of the poem so I lack the ability to critique the entire poem. What I read so far is an excellent twist of words.
Criticism / Grr...
Good question. I rate a piece on whether I was touched by it, did I get a full understanding of what the author was attempting to convey. If after rereading the piece a second time I still don't understand what the point was that is when I will make a comment that the piece needs clarification.
I especially like the way this song begins with a repeat of the words No one knows...It drawers the listener into the girl you are singing about and makes them want to know more about her. Overall, I can appreciate a beautiful love song and you have written one.
Romance / Is Love evoL?
The poem had an OK flow, but the reader is left to wonder what is exactly going on on the road to lead these two youngsters to their death (and that may be the writers intention). Overall, nice write.
Poetry / Kabba
When this starts out I don't know where it is going, but I like the way it ends because anything can turn into a poem for a writer. Nice.
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