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AGE:
55
LAST LOGIN: November 26
LAST LOGIN: November 26
BS in English, East Carolina University, Greenville, NC, 1977;
AAS in Business Computer Programming, College of the Albemarle, Elizabeth City, NC, 1996.
While high school career tests showed math and engineering strengths, it was too late. I started writing seriously when I was 14. My interest in creative writing peaked in high school and college, becoming obsessed with getting published, (after all, all I ever did was eat, sleep and drink poetry), until I received my earliest acceptance: a check for $.02.
My life came full circle after buying my first Macintosh computer. The increased productivity led to about 400% increase in writing output compared to a Sears electric typewriter; though I usually produce a first draft in l…
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They are worn, fingers matured from seeds first planted in water, a womb, either rich are barren, becoming a bird once: before I was water and the sun falling into a sea following a voice that was the sound of singing, night leaving you with the words trailing like fading sparks arcing to the ground, the sound of wings echoing behind each fiery shadow as you turned inward, towards them. Each has a name that will not change. You charter their soaring, escaping wings, ghosts named with each gla...
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The psychology of suicide is never not uninteresting. "I’m not unwell – not emotionally anyhow.” not unwell= I'm well, but not emotionally?? Confusing. "They should kill themselves too.” he said." Who are THEY? Comes out of nowhere. This is where you start to lose me. Technically, it's 25 million calories we owe the owner of the world. He's a good, generous Father. You write clearly and the dialog is good. Trivial things should never be treated as trivial to a writer.
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"showcase of electronics and artificial intelligence" Showcase suggests a sales venue. pg1 "2,010" = 2010 pg2 A lot of editorializing about their relationship and the gospel message. Show me the gospel in action, entertain me. I don't welcome being beat over the head with what a preacher would tell me from the pulpit. Don't preach at me in a novel.pgs2-7 "my Centrex. It’s easy. Wonderful!" Too much editorializing pg7 The pg7 explanation of revelation was a very good way to share the Bible. St...
Pleasant thought for a writer, probably multiple location for someone with multiple personalities.
Hard to believe that love dies. I think it's forgotten before it's killed.
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