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AGE: 16
LOC: Boynton Beach, FL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: January 14

My name is Breanna. I’ve been writing poetry since I was in the 5th grade, and I’m trying to get a book published.

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Poetry / Eloquent Cocaine
Version 1
8 Reviews   0 Comments
She's your cocaine She's your ecstasy And you know, you know You belong solely to she She's your fairy tale She's your lover She's your bad girl Under the covers She's your cuddler Your novel romance She's your mystery She'll put you in a trance She's your dictionary She's your eloquent She's such a lady She's a lesson on etiquette You know you want her You burn to kiss her But don't blink! You just might miss her.
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Poetry / Carnival Circus Circle
by Joel_Mitt
This is definitely a great piece of poetry. the line 'The word confusion, you have taken it for a lease' stuck with me, as it describes someone I know, and the last stanza is definitely great. Overall, I think this is a great poem.
Poetry / You Are ...
by peejie
I like the choices of words. Very nice!
Poetry / US
by chris_cross
I absolutely love the second to last stanza. Great job on this one!
Poetry / Living on the street
by Dapoet1968
I love the way you describe him, but I think it's a little too vague.
Poetry / Stray
by Ardriana
i love the personification of the sand and sea
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