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AGE:
20
LOC: Stillwater, OK
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 26
LOC: Stillwater, OK
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 26
I grew up in a small town called Perry, which was located in Oklahoma. My family never really got much, we had to live with what we had. It was alright cause what I obtained, I appreciated it that much more.
Going through grade school, I met this indian girl. Her name was Shiloh. That was ten years ago. We are a happy couple now and so on.
My interests are billiards, South Park, playing music in a band, raising dogs, driving, of course writing literature, drawing, painting, skateboarding and playing sports.
Most of my poetry are arranged in an abstract manner. I just write them down in the order that I feel suits what I am trying to say.
A few of my poems involve memories of my ex’s and childhood.
I’ve only been writing f…
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It is so hard to believe That I could be loved Like you love me That’s why, you are the perfect girl Your judgement overlooks my addictions Just all the more reason For me to quit them That’s why, you are the perfect girl I’ve seen worse, I’ve seen the worst But when I’m with you Nothing else matters in the whole wide world That’s why, you are the perfect girl I’ve known you for so long As well as you’ve known me so I would never ever want to let you go That’s why you are the perfect girl As ...
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As I lay wasted in the barren desert of my grassless backyard; face down, drips of freezing rain trikkle down my forehead. Did't matter to me though. "Can't be as bad as the shit that I've had to deal with all of my life," I thought to myself. My arms were pulsing with quiet fear as well as my legs. My heart leaps out with every thought of her. "Why do I deserve this? I've done nothing wrong to be treated this way." I look up at the dark vivid sky. My head is spinning as the tormenting cloud...
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It is so hard to believe That I could be loved Like you love me That's why, you are the perfect girl Your judgement overlooks my addictions Just all the more reason For me to quit them That's why, you are the perfect girl I've seen worse, I've seen the worst But when I'm with you Nothing else matters in the whole wide world That's why, you are the perfect girl I've known you for so long As well as you've known me so I would never ever want to let you go That's why you are the perfect girl As ...
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*I can't walk backwards with closed eyes no longer. I face trouble, knowing the bling truth. Everbody's life is black & blue. What can we do? Nothing, just sit back and enjoy the ride. Simple as that? No. No effort. No concern. Nobody tries. Only we can fix ourselves. How foolish of us to retrieve a simple life with no moral values. Our simple-minded ways have made us all dependent not only on success, but failure as well.* *Observe, hypothesize, and analyze, all signs of a true stalker. Thos...
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I'm a sly creaton A certain heathen don't touch me though For I am made of jello I know, I'm also a weirdo But I just can't help it I like to wiggle to my favourite tunes But how about you Do people also judge you Just shake it off and loosen up The day is almost over Don't worry about being clever Just do what needs to be done Have fun Bibbity-bop funny tunes Hoppity-joy and boppity-boo You can do it too Everyone is counting on you You may even get a laugh or two For what its worth, do it wh...
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First of all, I have to say I really like this piece. At the beginning of this piece, I've noticed that she felt worried that it was unecessary to do things that boys do like my girlfriend does. That in a way helped me understand how she feels when I do certain things. As far as publishing, I think you need work on your grammar. You're creativity intrigues me though. Like the part when Kelsey fell asleep and started to dream, you didn't mention to the reader that she was dreaming, I had to fi...
I understand what this means I think. Keeping your eyes set on one goal is more wise than trying to put all of your focus on many.
Your use of words are considerately used well. I had to read it a couple to undestand. What I have gotten out of this, I believe that this character (perhaps you, don't know if you intended it to be)regrets making love to a certain woman that he was once involved with. Or maybe he wishes to try things over again perhaps. Your style of poetry reminds me of my own. Good job.
What I like about this poem, well for how short it is, you make me understand how calm the sea is. I personally relate the storms and rolling waves in the sea to life itself how we fight and cause madness then after all of it, there is finally peace until the next storm which is inevitable. Good job.
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