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AGE:
22
LOC: Acworth, GA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 24
LOC: Acworth, GA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 24
my name as you see is very simple…just nick…no nicholas or other possible ways of spelling it…just plain old nick…no middle name, and i think that has something to do with being greek, because i have yet to meet a greek with a middle initial…if i must have a middle name, it will have to be rufus…
i, on the other hand am not as plain as my name…i’m actually the life of this town…you might have heard of me? i once gave a margarita to a seven year old because i thought they were slushies…i must have missed that comment about the frozen drink machine on that first day of work…if that was by any chance your little brother…i’m sorry…i can only apologize once…because it was pretty fuckin’ funny.
i’m terribly easy…
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the carpet holds a mixture of dust and debris from 11 months and 24 days of living. and fucking. tears are dried in the back right corner of the room. whether they rest on the headboard or the sheets. they are there. coins are used for more than laundry. and i remember the adult booth with your scene programmed for 75cents. blow your pitty on me blow your pride to me. and blow your insecurites with me. blowing is what you were always good at. and caring is something i was always bad at.
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your face is pretty. some may call it beautiful. i destroy beautiful things. it's a force of habit. nature. calls. leaves have fallen. so has orange. and brown. but mainly, yellow. died and fried the grass sprouts new opportunity. bleach kills off just the right amount. but it always left the trail cleaner than we left it. because i destroy beautiful things. a little bit of me is everywhere i go. you get around, was the last thing i remember hearing someone say to me. they were beautiful. i d...
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the things i said were meant to be a figment of your imagination. but i confused fiction and reality with the self-help sections and came to the conclusion that you were not interesting enough for a biography. your heart in the corner of the desk held more dust than the journal locked in my chest. and its a hard thing to come to terms with the fact that you don't know what you want anymore. and its even harder to accept that. because in the back of your mind, you know what that means. and tha...
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the dust on the ground is mixing well with the liquor that's been spilled. and clay never made more sense to me until now. the sink looks like it's growing a beard and the shower wall has more of your hair than my bed sheets do. and saying i love you was never more confusing than it was last night. because i always say what i mean...and lately...i'm starting to figure out that meaning and saying are two different sports. but that's just because you opened my eyes. and i was never good at seei...
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and the conversation last night didn't help the mood i was in. i try and put on an act even when i'm not happy. because i know the remains of a not happy day and i know i never want to be like that again. the phone could be described in two words: biological warfare you were so far last night. the mileage never changes. but the fact that you won't believe me when i say i miss you hurts me just as bad as hurting because i hurt you. believe me when i say its not intentional. because i don't lie...
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this was quite interesting none the less. the fact that the title ties in so well with each part of the piece pulled me in more than if it would have been some random title. being purely honest, for me, the title did it more than the work itself. that is not a bad thing either, that is what made me not get bored and made me want to finish more than two lines. i love how each different scenario is labeled on a different day. the fact that they were going backwards, did that mean anything, or w...
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short and sweet. the rhyming factor seems to fit well and actually flows with the poem. rhyming is sometimes a hard thing to do, and when done, it is an action that needs to be properly distributed throughout all the lines, which you seemed to have done well. the only part that made me uneasy was near the end was the part about the window, after i read it twice it flowed better, because i knew how everything was flowing. until next time -nick
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