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Sci Fi & Fantasy / preface for book
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I have decided to keep a journal, I don’t know if it is for my own sanity or a fear that I will not survive to tell my tale. I have been stranded now for what feels like a lifetime but in fact only a week has passed now since I awoke here in this strange place. How I came to be here and why are questions that I have asked myself a thousand times, as apart from the broken and fragmented dreams that terrorize my sleep I can remember little of who I am and how I came here before I awoke atop a g...
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The train journey I sit and stare, out the window, watching the world go by, Tree, tree, tree, bridge, tree, tree, lake, So fast they pass, only a moment to stare, as we go by, Tree, tree, tree, cattle, tree, tree, house, No thought for any, no time to think, watching the world go by, Tree, tree, tree, car, tree, tree, tunnel…… The darkness short lived, back to the light, watching the world go by, House, house, house, car, house, house, park, Everything changes so fast, like time speeds up, a...
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Poetry / Your Soul
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Your Soul At the earliest moment, in a blink of an eye, The soul is born, before birth its self, Bright like a star, the fire in the heart, The power, the passion, the raw energy is build, At birth its let lose, freed to the world, Nourished, and nurtured, it grows strong and wild, Through time, and conditioning, it is tamed and chained, Lashing out, as youth dies away, The pressures of life, the morals, and rules, Like wave after wave, upon the beach, The tide of these things, erode it away,...
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Poetry / The Traveller
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The Traveller Are lands so vast but are folk so sparse, But the end of the path a warm hearth you find, Smiling at the door no stranger unkind, Only kinsmen unknown thee never before dinned, With no money to offer for honey or bread, A tale you offer in replace instead, Long into the night the story you tell, Of trial and tribulation and thee night you fell, The sun comes up its time to go, Along the path you follow the flow, Till it beckons again and homeward bound, New kinsmen met yet more ...
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Fool's Gambit - Chapter Six
an intresting peice of work that has been well thought out in my view but lacks some depth in charater but i have not had the chance to read the earlier chapters so that is a hinderance but i hope to find and read the rest of this story keep up the work.
Non-fiction / The Errant Eye
Again a plesure to read i dont see why thias would not be picked up by a publisher, you have me laughing through out this piece like the gay nuns sceane and the lead up to including how does he drive, brilant, you keep me reading on wanting to find out the next thought that is going to pop into his head hope there will be more works based around this guy.
Short Story / The Nunnery (Revised)
a veyr intresting story, im not catolic or even christian and at first i though that i would not like this piece but i actully really enjoyed it. Its well ritten and you get a really good connection the the charecter and feeling or one with whilst he is getting his verbal floging, then a good laugh at the thought of him running down the corridoor scared for his life, if this work ie the full book this is from, was published then i would buy it very good.
Poetry / Artist and Girl
im going to be brief with this, to be honest i found this a little hard to read and understand but im only a simple man, the structure is well writen and the use of discriptive reffrence give a great feel it it. The last paragraph if may favorate one it drings the image of the girl sitting on a bus gazeing out the window with thought of the artist that has oversly given a big impact on her. I very good peice above that i would expect of your age.
brilent piece of writing you had me laughing all the way through im not sure the content of the rest of the book but im am going to read more of this, its easy to read and draws the reader to on waiting for the next comment that is going to be said. Chig interjects. ‘See, I told you they were fucking stupid – where were you born again Gregdude?’ ‘South Africa.’ ‘I rest my fucking case.’ brilant that is the best bit of the text and easy to belive i actully had a frin with the same view on life...
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