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AGE: 25
LOC: Lowell, MA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 27

“Perspective betrays with its dichotomy:
train tracks always meet, not here, but only
in the impossible mind’s eye;
horizons beat a retreat as we embark
on sophist seas to overtake that mark
where wave pretends to drench real sky.’

‘Well then, if we agree, it is not odd
that one man’s devil is another’s god
or that the solar spectrum is
a multitude of shaded grays; suspense
on the quicksands of ambivalence
is our life’s whole nemesis.

So we could rave on, darling, you and I,
until the stars tick out a lullaby
about each cosmic pro and con;
nothing changes, for all the blazing of
our drastic jargon, but clock hands that move
implacably from twelve to one.

We raise our arguments like sitting ducks
to knock them dow…

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This is the sound of sweet thunder; a steady rumble that starts in the heart and explodes in a cacophony of joyous song. thirst shall bathe Erotes here; amidst this pool of wishful chorus. parching the wit, and rendering exhausted echoes. Yet, dawn crests on the horizon and skys of azure bring color to this sweet melody that even the hard hearted cannot ignore their celestial theater looms over head though heavens lid begins to wane; rapture devours, their weak refrain replacing it with simp...
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Poetry / pants
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but inside this beautiful awakening i can watch your heart shine thin glisten as thoughts are revealed making the morrow seem quite dim your mask has shed its bone-mail shield so now face-to-face you must reveal the truth, in its humiliating entirety, the reason behind your steadfast purity, the constant only proper, in a dismal high school locker and she will smile once and squint deciding when to drop the hint that your emotional pants are down and everyone can see
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Short Story / jazz
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He wanted to mesh people. But not in a tangled contortionist pretzel-laid Monday sort of way. In fact, it was Tuesday when the riot occurred. A sunny back-drop laid shadows for the rioters to walk beside, giving the illusion to the senator that the masses were black and white radio dots. Fuzz, entering his territory like lightning fast signals slamming through your brain. . FRONT PAGE NEWS: "Screwy politician caught in lie! Baby oh baby, have the voters gone Awry!!" This was Senator James "st...
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the sun shone down on his shopping cart pretentiously as his roaring fictitious strides echoed off the pavement. Grizwald was a homeless man, with a very homeless-like approach to life. He was an asshole to most, and a drunkard to many, but despite his disgusting appearance, he always strived to make his hair neat in appearance. Today was the day that his barber appointment had a different meaning, because today was the day that he ran into Her. The incident that led up to this change in bar...
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Poetry / time unfolds
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time unfolds like origami, as you float beneath the rift, are you waiting? or are you reaching? both appear to co-exist. An apathetic soldier, eyes bloodshot begin to swell. Your dissimulated posture seems to shroud the torture well. Two steps forward you begin to fall, but two steps back you're in a well. Two steps up you're in the light, but you've learned that lesson well. The reigns are absent-minded as they drag you through the pain, so you jump sideways into nothing to avoid the cryptic...
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Poetry / Goddess
this poem is so beautiful and sad at the same time. an adjustment though... in the first stanza, "As they briefly caresses" just need to remove the final "s" the last two stanzas are definately my favorite, being captivated by something which "cannot be revealed" and thoughts you describe as "fading", yet being so mesmerized and entranced by an emotion, it makes for great poetry, and you delivered it very well.
this is really beautiful. i love how raw and real it is, it doesn't seem like you tried too hard, or took too long on it, which in this case is good, because its just chocked full of emotions. there are only slight errors in this such as: "the quartet into before unheard of musical dimension." you probably should put an "a" after "into". it just sounds a bit off without it. but otherwise, at first glance, it captured me :)
Poetry / "Vista"
this is really good! i especially like the last stanza; "I would have chosen Water, wind or river frozen I would have chosen any way but the one by which I’ve come"...thats beautiful! and how this poem was concluded i think fit very nicely. great job!
this was a really good poem...the only grammatical error i found was: "did i choose the path that would lead to my girlfriends rath?" -should that be (w)rath? if not, i'm not sure what rath means. but other than that, this poem seemed really genuine and heart-felt. the only thing i didn't like was the last two lines, they seemed out of place with the rhythm of the rest of the poem. I'm also not sure who "he" is that you mention in the end?
this is really good, although i found it a little hard to follow to be honest...and the fact that you're only 17 is very impressive
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