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AGE:
27
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 07
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 07
Hey! My name is Brent and am on this site because I do like to write. I have always liked to write but never was good at it. I never passed an English class in my life! I say things like worsh instead of wash and my spelling is horrible. I can tell a story though especially if it’s made up! I wish I had the talent to use descriptive words to paint a picture but I don’t so if you read my stuff you will probably just have to use your imagination! Please feel free to give me any feedback even as bad as it may be! I may not like it but I will try to fix it! I aim to please.
COming back full throttle! Took a hiatus off from writing to try and become the #1 ranked madden 09 player in the world on the wii. My attempt failed I was only able t…
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"Intro" Last night I should’ve been celebrating the biggest score of my life. Instead I found myself locked in a jail cell with invisible bars, arguing with myself about what it would smell like if my life was a scented candle. After much dilemma, after hours of deliberation, and as the morning sounds of nature penetrated the fortress in which I was confined; me and myself did finally come into agreement that my life is, was, and always would’ve been a layered candle. On...
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The summer of 1986 was so eventful; not only did I lose my first tooth, but that was the summer of the very first P.E.A.R. festivel. The Pickford Estes Apple Retreat was the town's attempt to reconnect. The plan was to have pie eating contest, games, apple bobbing, cake walks, that sort of thing. Besides the fun and games there would also be a contest. This contest was open to men, woman, and children of all ages. The best coo...
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Good story overall! I liked the read only can suggest you indent between paragraphs and do a little editing! You are definately on your way and if you fix the little things it won't take away from the story! Great author!
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I found this piece pretty entertaining and really well written for a journal entry! Keep it up!
Very well written! No bad feedback here! Actually going to add it to my favorites. It's one of the most crystal clear reads I have read on this site! Nice job! Also What is the code? And are they vampires? Aliens ? What?
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