nubadunk's profile
AGE:
28
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 23
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 23
Hey! My name is Brent and am on this site because I do like to write. I have always liked to write but never was good at it. I never passed an English class in my life! I say things like worsh instead of wash and my spelling is horrible. I can tell a story though especially if it’s made up! I wish I had the talent to use descriptive words to paint a picture but I don’t so if you read my stuff you will probably just have to use your imagination! Please feel free to give me any feedback even as bad as it may be! I may not like it but I will try to fix it! I aim to please.
COming back full throttle! Took a hiatus off from writing to try and become the #1 ranked madden 09 player in the world on the wii. My attempt failed I was only able t…
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"Intro" Last night I should've been celebrating the big...
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"Show and Smell" Are you kidding? I couldn't do the truffle shuffle, I didn't have a license to drive, I didn't attend Notre Dame, I never hung out with Dr. Jones, I wasn't the president, I didn't hang out with a kid named Lucas, and I wasn't in puppy love, you get the point? The treasure map just sat in a shoebox. I'm sorry it wasn't a ...
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"The Jobber" I spent most of my life pinned to the mat I've popped crowds, well not me, but on my behalf Gotten rowdy with the best of em, even battled dragons a ton of warriors, samoans, even took on a savage I'm a jobber I'm like a brawler, from Brooklyn &...
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I liked what i read before and i like this too. I would like to see the actually movie because it's hard for me to see the same vision as the writer. it reminds me of my days selling perfume and pitching the dvd guy then he would pitch his sell to me. It makes me wonder if that man also dealt in c4!!!!
Lot of emotions in this poem. Got the feeling of abuse not only to one self but in harm of others. It's really deep and weel written. didn't see any grammatical errors at all. Keep it up good work!
What can I say I want more. I figured it had to be something of a super human story by the title, but i had no idea the dead woman could see the future which is ironic because she couldn't she her own death. Also I'm intrigued to figure out why his words killed her maybe his voice is so strong. She have a long lost lover on the side? That's what I got towards the end. Great so far I want more.
The rhyme scheme was good and the flow was nice. A well written short poem! Short simple to the point, that's what i like.
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