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AGE:
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LOC: Australia
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 10
LOC: Australia
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 10
Lani Marcus aka nxmq has been an active participant in Perth’s scene as an artist, musician and music journalist for many years. She has collaborated with numerous musicians including UK breaks producer Kraymon, French live act Sy-fy, French drum ‘n’ bass producer FEDE, Melbourne’s lo fi artist Sense (Co-Founder of Emotional Electronic Music) and Sydney based Falcon St Beats, as well as many other Australian musicians. Recently nxmq has teamed up with Brendan Slaven under the guise of Ele-Mental to write spine-tingling electronic melodics. On stage the two give a beautiful live performance that includes a midi controller guitar, synchronised live video mixing and an avant guard approach to vocal sounds. Her radio show, Earlectronics, on …
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She tried desperately to move her fingers across the keys in some coherent fashion: a micro-produced column of taps echoed silently through the room. Only symbols_ 山 that were unrepresenting of her 林檎 written communication attempts_ sprung up in a dialogue box [私] they would not even stay stagnant on the screen long enough for her to type in symbol code=that might later be deciphered//www.urges of the unsustantiating internet rose and fell.com she opened her body to the connection and wasted ...
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Tiager chased him down the back stairs trying hopelessly to stick to his fading black shadow. The wind whistled through the marble encased corridor. A cold chill swept through her body. She could hear the sound waves of his footsteps vibrate through the ground, edging further and further away from her/ like a lost two-step procession of enlarged ants. She traced the beat through her mind tweaking its frequencies and enhancing the bass line/ but his shadow had long ago merged with the night. T...
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Caught up in the rhythm of the bus she pressed her nose even closer to the glass/ intermittently gazing outside as a whir of foreign obstacles rushed past/ her mind fixated on the past/ too filled with memories to take in the outside world. It seemed strange really, the welcoming signs of an unfamiliar city would usually be more than enough to draw her in/ but the flashing neon and artfully scrawled symbols on the signs outside left her empty. All the while she yearned for a solid, grinding b...
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The military used infared cameras to detect any motion. A slight change in the visual scans had appeared/ the exterior was corroding. A few hours later, as the sun was falling through the trees, cracks started to appear in the contraption. Inside government strong holds the employees applauded their own work. The death of the one day old blue empire was eminent. There was so much celebration in their secret offices that they failed to realise the rest of the world. Where the metal was being e...
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She chased him down the back stairs trying hopelessly to stick to his fading black shadow. The wind whistled through the marble encased corridor. A cold chill swept through her body. She could hear the sound waves of his footsteps vibrate through the ground, edging further and further away from her/ like a lost two-step procession of enlarged ants. She traced the beat through her mind tweaking its frequencies and enhancing the bass line/ but his shadow had long ago merged with the night. Tiag...
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Your subject tense is all messed up in the beginning. e.g. "When Women Are Given A Talent,Will She Sharpen That Talent." Either change it to "Will they sharpen that talent?" or "When a woman is given a talent," This subject tense discrepancy continues throughout your writing. I would suggest changing it as it makes your writing frustrating to read. Again, "Will She Misused It." should be, "Will she misuse it?" Also, is it necessary to capitalise every word? Perhaps try and re-read your work o...
Your piece, Evolution, A Theory-As Is Gravity, is well written and interesting. It maintains a light hearted feel for a subject that is usually written about with a heavy hand. Just a few minor points: This sentence seems awkward, "Evolution is an organism’s specific trait’s change over generations." Try "Evolution is evidenced by a change in an organism's biological chemistry. A specific trait may develop irregularities over many generations, slightly changing the species." This sentence, "c...
This story was well written, only a couple of minor grammar points to pick up on. You have a few superfluous quotation marks in this work, “strangest day of my life.” and “And when is he ever?” I said to myself.(If you are saying it to yourself, you generally don't need to insert quotation marks). Honestly, I was a little let down by the plot. Your writing style is good, however, in this case it would be better suited to a novel or longer short story.
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