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AGE:
22
LOC: Chicago, IL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 25
LOC: Chicago, IL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 25
Hello, you can call me Geno. I am 20 years old, and I am a Virgo. I was born and raised in Chicago. I have a 1 year old daughter named Imani. She is the most beautifull girl I have ever seen. I am a member of the United Staes Navy. Right now, I am in the Delayed Entry Program. I will leave for bootcamp on Februery 27th. I am very excited to leave, because it will give me a chance to see other places. I look forward to traveling; I will be doing a lot of that during my time on this Earth. I also look forward to starting a Real Estate Company. During my lieasure time; I read, write,and play Halo. I am very much fascinated by computers, and good Novels! Lolitah Files is one of my favorite authors. I am in the process of writing a book. ( It…
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Only the strong will survive in a world of miscellaneous foes who find comfort in between I will never lie near the line of unsure Let this be the proclamation of heartlessness on the behalf of me Never again will I put myself in the position of vulnerability I find strength and comfort in loneliness under the condition that I may hide in the covenant of its stability I have come to copes with the fact that there is no better half of me So here he that on this day I declare ISOLATION
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Chapter 1 "Racheal", Geno said in a soft voice. "Baby are you home"? Still no answer. "She must be at the gym with Camille", he said to himself. He had been to the gym himself the day before, so his body was still sore. That, combined with a 10 hour shift he had pulled last night. The CTA had just layed off 150 employees, so the vets were left with plenty of overtime. He had been on this job for the last 10 years. In his earlier years with the company, he had instructed the 79th street bus t...
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Chapter 1 "Racheal", Geno said in a soft voice. "Baby are you home"? Still no answer. "She must be at the gym with Camille", he said to himself. He had been to the gym himself the day before, so his body was still sore. That, combined with a 10 hour shift he had pulled last night. The CTA had just layed off 150 employees, so the vets were left with plenty of overtime. He had been on this job for the last 10 years. In his earlier years with the company, he had instructed the 79th street bus t...
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If I could have you, to share love so true. I would paint Happiness; with a sky so Blue. I can picture us painting a picture with all of the colors of Trust and Seduction. Rosey Red trees, Purple Streams, and Powder Blue birds. Turning colors into adjectives; paint pictures with words. I can't paint the picture because my hands are stuck. How I would like to make you a prisoner of Love, but it seems your already cuffed. A frame crafted from platinum, and gold. Love is to be showed much more t...
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How can I Adore something that has no soul? Something that has been given it's worth by Man. Why should I Appreciate something that cant give me comfort in return? How could I Cherish an item that possessess no Love? Why would I Hold Dear to me something that cant console me in my time of need? Why Value an item that can lose it's value. I can't conjecture the thought of protecting something that will exist in the same state, even after I am long gone. The Persuit for Platinum, Diamonds, Silv...
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Dude; I loved it. I like the way you used the grammer change. tried reading it with a scottish accent and it made it easier to understand. Im not sure about publishing this with that spelling, but then again i have never been published, or attempted something of this nature. I apologize if I cant critque it; its only because im not an expert myself.
Meaning: Truth alone prevails, not untruth. By truth the path is laid out, the Way of the Gods, on which the seers, whose every desire is fulfilled, proceed to the Highest Abode of the True. Quotes like this made your story hard for a reader like myself to understand easily. It was a tad bit complicated. (Gone, gone, gone beyond, gone altogether beyond, wisdom all hail!) i think this line was a little funny. Your work has a lot of thought put into it! I like it; it challenges my brain. Its no...
Well I loved the story. I really like how you left no room for misconception. You explained every action so well. I do believe you should add more action to the story, but as far as grammer, I cant correct you because im bnot an english major. Keep up the good work!
I Love this piece, and would be interested in reading the first four chapters! It really grasped my attention. One thing is some of thew words you used confused me; I couldnt figure out what they meant. It's not you though; im just not the brightest bulb on the christmas tree! lol... If you dont mind; I would like to know what a ned is! And what is a jakey? Dont laugh, but I have never heard of that. But overall; I loved reading this story. It really kept my imagination occupied! lol...
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