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I like it, it all flows very well and the thoughts and feelings expressed in it, i can relate with a little. I think overall it is a great poem and I am glad I read it.

I like that it's about being with someone alone, almost as if for an eternity. You may have meant to have the poem with not a lot of imagery but I think maybe a little bit could make it better, but then again I am a person who enjoys imagery. The poem, nonetheless, is still a great work.