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I like the warm feeling I got when I read this, it reminded me of driving on the open road and letting my mind wander into creativity. Very Good
I like the way it is put together. I think this is something that is better the more times you read it.
I like what you have written. It is a style that I like to read. It really sends my imagination into full effect with each sentence, keep up the good work. Sometimes no title is needed.
I would personally right it this way to make more sense. It is a good poem and I think you have a great way with words. Stones don’t stop being on This pathway through leafy woods No matter the way the wind blows Or the autumn colors fall Through springs of ever flowing rain With summers crowded with fun And winters of natures secular's freeze I hate when people tell me what to write but I felt these words when I read your poem.
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