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Non-fiction / 6 word memoir
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Novel Treatments / The Lambent Light: Chapter 8
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Like what your doing here. I think the words failed life should be put at the end or changed. Maybe Im being to literal here but you cant have failed life and then became a success. Life isnt over yet. So how can you have failed it. Hope Im not sounding to anal, I do reall like your concept here.
These 6 words have so much substance within them. The evoke much emotion.
Don't we all know the feeling of rejection. You bring the feeling of it straight to the surface.
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Just wanted to let you know that this verse may be double printed. The message he HE brings you is death
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