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AGE:
17
LOC: Sterling, VA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 19
LOC: Sterling, VA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 19
My name is Amber and I live in Sterling, VA. I consider myself a creative person, but I know that even though my ideas may be good, I don’t always express them well enough. But i’m working on it, and I hope to improve my writing skills mcuh more. My main career goal is to become an english or a math teacher, but I would like to write as well.
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“What is it?” Diana asked as she looked up from Ryan’s laptop. “It’s a Halloween Carnival, at Nitaren Park,” Ryan called back from the kitchen. Diana stared once more at the computer screen, scanning the page for information about this carnival. She looked back at him again, but he was busy getting something from the fridge and could not see her look of disgust directed towards him. So she looked back at the computer. “What do you think?” Ryan asked as he walked out of the kitchen and sat dow...
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"Bye." I walked back to the car, and I decided I didn't want to go home. "Brendon?" "Yea?" "Can I stay with you tonight?" "Well, I don't know if that's such a good idea." "What? Why not?" "Well...........you know what? Never mind. Sure you can stay with me." He smiled, but it was uneasy, which I didn't like, but I didn't ask him about it. So, I went to the bus with him and we were gonna sneak into the bus, but Ryan, Spencer, and Jon were on the couch playing video games. "Do you know what tim...
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"Uh, girl please. It's not that hard to figure out. Besides, if you weren't dating, I don't think Brendon would have just come with you to see me." I looked at Brendon and at the same time he looked at me, and we blushed. "Aw, you two even have the couple blush down. How cute!" "Natasha, you are amazing." "Yea, I know. Anyway, what are we doing today?" "Well, Brendon said he would treat us to a day of shopping if we wanted it." "Ha, just lemme grab my purse and we're out of here!" So we left ...
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PART 1 "I'm going to sleep," I said to my 15-year-old baby sister Rachel as I turned of the light. I looked at the clock and it read 1:30 am, which is my usual bedtime these days. "Okay, Amber," "Are you staying up?" "Um, yea. I'm gonna call Dustin." Dustin is her boyfriend, and the two of them are like glue, and they’re either always talking on the phone, or are with each other. "Okay, but you know that nana doesn't like it when you talk on the phone this late. You’re not even supposed to be...
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The something amazing starts out in a cloud, And it shimmers with tons of light. It is also extremely beautiful, And makes everything so very white. It can be very cold, But it could make you very warm. You play with it and you have a good time, And it usually comes from a storm. It reveals its own beauty And it can be high to low. If you haven't guessed it yet, don't worry, I'll tell you of course- it's SNOW!
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Overall it's a very good story and plot. I really enjoyed it, and I look forward to more. There are a couple sentences in the thing that don't really seem to go together, but i don't think it was anything to bad. However, some of the parts that are supposed to be scary, like when she mentions the couple times that she though it was Anna, but it really wasn't, don't seem all that scary because you're not playing into it enough.
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wow, thats really.....interesting, true, and inspirational.
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