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AGE:
17
LOC: Kings Mountain, NC
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 18
LOC: Kings Mountain, NC
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 18
my name is kyle griffin
i write almost constantly
i write to vent out my feelings in a self-theraputic way.
I’m also part of an improv/sketch comedy troupe
www.youtube.com/toneygriffincorp
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Part 1, 1 AN EYE FOR AN EYE, A TOOTH FOR THE MOUTH Distant and distraught, the voices in his head echoed like a chamber ensemble. He reached up and clasped his head between his hands, trying to focus. But he couldn’t. Thoughts drifted in and out of his head randomly like plankton in the ocean. He realized he was lying face down on the ground. What happened? He thought, this has to be a dream. He lifted his head up; a thin strand of drool stretched from the edge of his mouth to the small pudd...
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Characters: THOMAS-wearing a gray overcoat and what ever else the director chooses CHARLES-warm clothing DAD-dress clothing HEIDI -warm clothing SAM-warm clothing SHADOWS A, B, C, D, E (completely black clothing, black masks, shadows E wears a gray overcoat like THOMAS. A, B, and E are definitely male. C and D are definitely female. Try to male their costuming and movements exact to the character they are shadowing.) Opens with THOMAS pacing around his office. Two of the shadows are in the cu...
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CAST: Michael Stephanie Joseph Woman Behind Counter (WBC) Enseamble of about four or five SR is set up like a living room area with a front door far SR, there is a television set off center toward SL. C is a bedroom where there is a bed. Lights are on in the living area as well as the TV, all lights are off SL. Michael: (Coming on SR) Hey honey I’m home. (He speaks very dully) I’m thinking we should have casserole tonight, what do you think? (Walks to the TV (off C) it is turned on) You left ...
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Maybe it was just my imagination that the body lying in front of me moved, or maybe it was the light in this cold place, or maybe it was my nerves getting to me, but it sure did look as if it moved. I reached my hand up and scratched my head, dried blood between my fingers flaking off into my hair. I was thinking. We were thinking. Thinking about the best time to act, thinking about the consequences that could result in what I'm doing and am going to do. And he was thinking it too. He was thi...
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I looked ahead into the street watching the people scurrying around like ants, trying to not be late to their menial jobs. This makes me angry. Self-centered, disrespecting, unforgiving, “I-only-have-time-for-myself” people. They find time to watch Oprah though. I pick out my subjects carefully, watching their movements, listening to their cell phone conversations, learning their daily routine. I learn everything about everyone. I’m just a passive observer. I stand here at the corner every d...
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I used to read sci-fi/ fantasy all of the time then i got into poetry and stephen king this makes me want to reenter the realm =] one thing i dont like which you really cant change is calling something a "Quest" even though that is essentially what it is it just bugs me for some reason. im speaking of in the character's dialoque like when they were talking about the accidents during training etc . . . that may just be a pet peeve of mine so disregard that if you want. the whole world staying ...
I can relate to this piece. My father past away when i was 12 and i still havent gotten over it i know how difficult writing about such a tender subject as this can be but you put this on here for a critique first off avoid cliches cliches are to be blunt cliche and they make a piece sound immature and elementary one line that strcuk me was "before i see your name in stone" i like it i dont know why. in the paragrah about you wishing he would awaken in the casket "i fooled you didnt i?" i thi...
it is very difficult to pick up on a piece of work without reading what eas written before and still maintain continuity and interest throughout the writing when reading this though i was able to pick up on it and make sense of things and keep my interst i liked reading this very much regards -kyle-
The character development and descriptions are very well done in this piece it felt it very easy to relate to the characters Tisha's and the others actions and thoughts are very logical which all pretty much makes sense considering this is nonfiction although i find it very difficult to capture the essence and sheer beauty of real life experiences in a detailed and novel like way you have accomplished this, quite well i might add another challenging thing about this is that you are writing ab...
im commenting as im reading this and o far i do like it the vietnam war is a very itersting yet difficult topic in itself to write about the beggining lines of the general are really well put at first though i thought it was WWII then found out otherwise this must be later in the war too because if it was earlier, which im sure you know, the gen ould not have said that loved the Jesus's execution bit great characterization think a follow up to his should be from a us soldier were they colect ...
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