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AGE:
16
LOC: Modesto, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 18
LOC: Modesto, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 18
So, let’s see. I’m 15 and a junior in high school. I don’t write very much but the guy who created this website is my friend’s uncle. So yeah… Well I hope you like my stuff!
-Later:D
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After immediately being rejected from the waste of time known as American Idol, a peeving midget named jocko went to a very well known loony house. He then picked out what he thought was the best team of insane chickens ever to walk the face of the earth. He trained these chickens to be killer ninjas over a long and painful period of 17 minutes. With his team of lethal, foot high, weapons of mass destruction carrying out every order given, he thought it would be time for his sweet revenge. He...
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"I wish I could go back to a time when my biggest problem was deciding what dress to put on Barbie."
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"Jappino- isn't that like japanese and phillipino?"
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people are like slinkys. not much fun to look at. or to even talk to for that matter. actually, they're pretty much useless. and don't really have a purpose. they're also slightly lame. but you can't help but laugh when you push 'em down the stairs. i have to admit, i like slinkys better.
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You are the little mouse and I am the cat that chases you away every time I get too close, but my heart won't let me stop.
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this is good. i don't know if it's long enough to be considered lyrics though. if this was an actual song it would be kind of short. this part was a little awkward with the syllables: "people can come and go in life and it can cut like a knife" maybe take out the 'can' in the first line and add another syllable in the second line. like 'can cut you like a knife' but i like the rest. : )
i like it. you have some grammatical errors, such as "sore" not "soar" and "if the night's too far away." but good imagery. and it does have alot of feeling.
creepy... i think that this is going to be a good story. i think you should finish re-writing it. i would love to read the rest.
haha. this was funny. except for the whole kicking babies thing. lol. where did you come up with this? it's so random.. but i still like it : ) and yes, i did laugh out loud.
okay. i reviewed the first version of this. and i was really confused. but now it makes alot more sense. i like what you've written so far. i don't think it's too cluttered. i think that alot of this stuff needs explaining. and as you continue on with the story [[if you do, which i hope you do]], the need to explain things will disappear. but i was not confused at all. i am actually really interested to see what's going on with this. one thing: when you say "our relationship evolved into a be...
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