peejie's profile
AGE:
43
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 31
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 31
Okay my vital stats are as follows:
Female, 41, college grad (BS Management) performing a job in Finance by day, while working to create a transition full-time to the writing world. I’ve written since I was a young kid.
My projects are many:
fitness newsletter; women’s advice column; an e-mag; short stories; some poetry; working on a mystery novel and work of fiction based upon truth which I know or have learned about. My desire is to be a syndicated columnist.
I feel if we’re not growing, we’re not living – we’re merely existing. And life’s too short not to fully enjoy and have fun while we explore the earth.
Feel free to review any and all of my submissions, once I enter them. And thank you in advance for your kind…
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You've lifted my gaze From the sullen earth to the luxuriant sky Where Fortuna's Wheel turns and portentous comets fly. You've lifted my heart from the scarred and grievous past To anticipate a future I cannot forsee. You are the song the heavens Sing for me.
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True friends love you No matter how you act; Overlooking your imperfections They find pride in that fact. They take pleasure in being with you And in no way let you down. They reassure and encourage you At the risk of being a clown. They always stand by you True friends won't drift away; Even if things are going amiss They are there without delay. True friends are difficult to find Yet even harder to lose; How extraordinary it would be If as a spouse, a friend you choose.
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You make me promises that you never keep Broken dreams get expensive and words are cheap You tell me one thing then act a different way My ragged heart is a high price to pay You say love doesn’t come with a guarantee But I tell you it should be naturally Just wishing and hoping, I keep on forgiving Though you never do, I can’t keep forgetting Why do I keep expecting you to change When happiness seems so out of range Is love a journey devoid of destination Or is it but a trial of constant hes...
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This writing is actually good, though I think could undergo a bit of re-editing. You are passionate with verbiage as in: My mind feels unrestrained with with my stressful pain. How many of us can relate to that!! And People don’t understand me and think me unkind, along with How am I supposed to unwind are great together. That's what I personally would like to see more of. The gathering of your thoughts to empower this writing more than it is. I enjoyed it -
Good rhythm and descriptors. It's enjoyable - a quick read. I'd reflect more on the re-editing and stanza placement. It feels just a bit forced, as in: This place it is dark, but it is home together we can coexist together we can be great And the stanzas seem to change a bit more than they should with each ensuing one. I believe this is good writing and focus. You have the talent, perhaps with a bit more reflecting on revision and concise eloquence. Good job.
Excellent work as a blog or otherwise. Often the best writing, the best reporting, is uncharacteristically sincere with immediate reply of your visions and thoughts. I think that if this is true writing, then it will cast opinions and descriptions and limitations without end. It is descriptive; simple yet thorough. If I had to pick one thing I find left hanging it is the last sentence. It strikes for the dramatic, but it leaves me lifeless. What is it's intention? It does not bear witness to ...
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