phlow's profile
AGE:
41
LOC: Australia
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 26
LOC: Australia
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 26
I write to escape
I write as a form of release
I write to forget
I write to remember
I write to lose myself
I write to find myself
I write as a form of self-therapy
I write to maintain my sanity
I write to challenge myself
I write for better understanding
But most of all,
I write for the love of it
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Version 1
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The bitter taste Proceeding the end of an affair Need not have been; Wasted words and good intentions Never really meant for Such an occasion. Love and hate Are but passing emotions Like the clouds overhead On this wintry summer’s day. Words of anger And conciliation Alternate and make this ending Like all human endings Messy and emotionally charged, That no strong liquor Nor gritted teeth Can take away the pain of suffering Loneliness bestows upon each one of us Or the pain of indignity Brou...
Version 3
4 Reviews
0 Comments
Glebe The very sound of it, The mouthing of it, Puts a smile across one’s face, A pang of loss across my heart: She used to live here with her mother, Intermittently, in between lovers. I used to walk her and her dog (Who fancied himself a contender For the track at Wentworth Park) Along its quiet shady streets, Populated with tall Jacarandas, Purple carpet underneath our feet. Past the murmurings of Victorian mansions, Federation lodges, workmen’s cottages. It’s always hard to find a spot to...
Version 2
2 Reviews
3 Comments
Glebe The very sound of it, The mouthing of it, Puts a smile across one’s face, A pang of loss across my heart: She used to live here with her mother, Intermittently, in between lovers. I used to walk her and her dog (Who fancied himself a contender For the track at Wentworth Park) Along its quiet shady streets, Populated with tall Jacarandas. Purple carpet underneath our feet. Past the murmurings of Victorian mansions, Federation lodges, workmen’s cottages. It’s always hard to find a spot t...
Version 1
5 Reviews
9 Comments
At the top of William Street looms the sign Massive, red, and scintillating Pointing us to what we’ve all been seeking It’s the real thing. You can’t beat the feeling. Spruikers fat and thin make promises Of fun and excitement, pussy galore Available now for a limited time only Step this way right into our premises Glittery and shimmering with fairy lights Another world another parallel dimension With poles of chrome polished day and night By the sweaty thighs of exotic dancers Tourists from ...
Version 2
4 Reviews
4 Comments
Across the waters, placid, cool and calm I float my fragile hopes on a folded paper boat And pray they reach you still intact That you may keep them safe from harm Hold them dearly, like the way I hold you in my dreams And nurse those peaceful feelings of pure bliss That come in waves and ripples, often with a kiss. Across the fire, raging, burning bright and hot I shoot my intentions on arrows straight and true Try to hold my breathing at a steady, measured pace For I just cannot put out th...
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Absolutely delicious! I loved each and every single, resonating line. The standout line for me must be "to fear this dark for lack of light". The diction is perfect. A little too perfect, perhaps. It gives the poem a certain glibness. For me, this sits somewhat uncomfortably with the matter at hand. Yet the choice of words all tie in with each other and gives credence to the title and subject. Perhaps the rhymes come too easily - especially for the subject matter, where time seems suspended, ...
u'r in love, gurl, n u don't know it! u jus wanna get back to the heady days of fallin in love, when all is bright n wonderful n full of lovin n kisses n no worries n no arguments between u n ur man. but when all the confetti settles n the magical lites go twinklin out n the cold bright lite of day shines on what u'v got, ur askin where's the respect n honor n love? if u ain't in love, why u cryin for? u can pray to god to restore ur life with ur lover forever more, but if he don't learn to g...
Somehow, I'm not able to fully pick up on and appreciate the dream-like qualities that I would associate with a poem entitled 'Dream'. Maybe there's too many descriptives, verbs, pronouns, adjectives, etc., that anchor me down and prevent me from floating with your intentions, desires and longings. For example, in the first stanza, line 1 (S1L1) think what would happen if you dropped the 'my' and 'I'm' and rework the line logically; and S1L3 - 'to the taste' (one wouldn't associate sweetness ...
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