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LOC: Conway, AR
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Poetry / To Fly
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As i sit here i think of how grand it would be to fly where the sky is the limit as i soar in the sky with little people below, and the universe up high i think of how grand it would be to fly.
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Poetry / Defiant Beauty
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When I was young and beauty old I watched all words drift away. When I saw their tears at man’s great sword I hid my soul within the wind, and that day I perished. Of all the grief inside me I know not of one as distressed, as the whispers of the trees as the music pours out through this soul that echoes. It resonates. Touché heart, I bled for you. Fingers bend unwillingly to do your malicious deeds. They fold under weight that is too tiring. Simply implying your need has caused misfortune. ...
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Poetry / Defiant Beauty
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When I was young and beauty old I watched all words drift away. When I saw their tears at man’s great sword I hid my soul within the wind, and that day I perished. Of all the grief inside me I know not of one as distressed, as the whisper’s of the trees as the music pours out through this soul that echoes. It resonates. Touché heart, I bled for you. Fingers bend unwillingly to do your malicious deeds. They fold under weight that is too tiring. Simply implying your need has caused misfortune....
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Poetry / xoxoxo
omg, um, i'm not sure how to review this one. the imagery was very...loud. i liked it although it was very dark and moody, but that might not be the best word for it. very, very good poem.
very nice, but i must confess that i'm young and what it all said was not up my alley of expertise. but beyond that very beautiful and slightly frightening with incubus and succubus. although it was a little hard to follow.
Poetry / A Game of Chess
Wow. I really, really liked that. that would be a poem i would write on my mirror and read every time i saw it. of course it doesn't flow freely, but that's just because of the word choice, and i think people need to think on how they read, so i think its perfect. very clever poem and hope to see more.
Poetry / A week in Munich
this was very nice, but i don't understand what exactly you were talking about. i don't understand how some of the things mentioned tied together. titled "A week in Munich" i fail how a African diplomat and polar bears deals with Munich. but your poem is beautiful but i just don't get it, but it is a little early in the morning for deep thinking. great job, sorry i couldn't be anymore help.
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