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AGE:
22
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 04
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 04
I’m a twenty year old soldier, wife and writer. I enjoy reading various genres of books, but I usually write prose with a tint of romance.
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1961 I. A slight groan rose from within Jack’s throat, as he lazily rolled out of bed that early Monday morning. His thoughts always being the same on Mondays, agitated at having to gather his things together for work. “It’s not as if these students are grateful for the things they learn anyway.” He took a longer shower than usual, dreading the small moment in time between exiting the shower and getting dressed for work. He walked down the stairs to the kitchen, to find Samantha, his wife, co...
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I'd have to say that I agree with your stance on khakis. I used to hate wearing them while working at my old job. Thankfully those days are in the past, and I now enjoy a nice pair of jeans or black pants instead. To review this, however, I have to say that I like the emotions in what's written here - humor/satire, frustration, possibly anger. I definitely encourage you to write more about these things. You have a good way with words. I just suggest you not use so many periods, as that could ...
Very good piece. I like the emotion in this piece, though it does make me sad knowing it comes from such a lonely place. I hope your life is happier now.
This is a very good piece of work. I'm anxious to read more, as I want to see what happens between Carolyn and David. Their relationship is interesting, and maybe you could expand on it more as you continue your story. Then again, I see that this is chapter 21 of your story, so this actually intrigues me to read the beginning up to this point. Very good work. Keep it up!
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