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AGE:
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LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 03
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 03
I am an english major just getting started with my own identity in writing. When you review me, please do not go over punctuational typos. I do not come to this site for grammatical help. This is just raw writing i give to you. So tell me about your thoughts on my writing, don’t just write about punctuational errors to get credits. I won’t enjoy that. I would love to hear what i can change word-wise to make the writing better, but as for the crazy little symbols we throw between and at the ends of words, i could care less. haha.
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We flee from halogen harpies, that rise and set with the Appalachian Drumlins. The gray blanket envelops us, chokes us, blinds us. But i do not navigate, I contemplate. A panicked passenger on a sojourn home. Relegated to laying back in an automobile ottoman, sleeping the travel daze away, time traveling. An educational respite on the blanketed interstate. The dwarfed clouds fill heads with metaphysics and sedate those who resist. So for now, I'll sleep.
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The problem with the Church is that it's full of people.
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Oh rain. Cousin. You bring renewal and sadness as if one. But your coming is revered in quiet solitude by those who truly understand. For you, my friend, are the cleanser of earth and washer of sins. You are the child of the sky delivered to us in immaculate birth and in death returned to the heavens. For no sooner have you bathed the world and allowed the sun to shine once more, that the sky returns you back.
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great truth. The ignorance of blind men are the greatest dangers in the world. i feel you could even take this so far as to write a piece on it. Or shorten it even more into a more subtle quote. please don't stop writing.
YEA! disc is my life. and i love the quote. It's very smart. I think it should be a disc brand. "Disc Connect" Please don't stop writing.
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not bad. breaking such simple things down into what they truly are is always an enjoyable thing to read. I feel this could've easily been a poem instead of a quote. Perhaps losing two questions and creating one: "The past and present were once the future, The present and future will soon be the past The past was once the future and present So is this the future past we call the present?" or something like that...just suggestions. really great quote. please don't stop writing.
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