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AGE: 54
LOC: Casco, ME
GEN: Female
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Children's / The Snowsuit
Version 1
0 Reviews   0 Comments
I already had my breakfast, and then I combed my hair. So now I'll go outside and play in the lovely winter air. I put on my extra sweater and another pair of socks I went and found my mittens in the hallway, in a box. My mom helped me with my snowsuit, then she helped me with my hat. I'll soon be throwing snowballs that will land with quite a splat. My boots took lots of tugging to get them on my feet. Mom put my scarf around my neck and then I was complete. Can't wait to get outside today....
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Children's / Snack Attack
Version 1
11 Reviews   6 Comments
Did I hear you just say, I can't have a snack? I think I might faint from this food that I lack! I'm starving I tell you! I have to eat soon. So what if I've snacked every hour since noon. Did you just say "supper"? That's not what I need. "Can't I have a candy?" I pout and I plead! I'm so very hungry! I just want to eat. but please do not feed me that yucky gray meat! A big bowl of ice cream, now that would be good. No! Not mashed potatoes, cause they taste like wood. I must eat my veggies? ...
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Children's / Evacuate
Version 1
11 Reviews   0 Comments
Attention all bugs: EVACUATE! Better move out before it's too late. The mowing machine is making a pass, spitting out bugs that stay in the grass!
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Children's / Drama Queen
Version 3
10 Reviews   0 Comments
I like to be a drama queen, to try and get my way. I stomp my feet, I cry and yell. I did it yesterday. My mother said if I don’t stop she’ll take away my phone, but that just made me cry some more and very loudly moan. Every time the teacher speaks, I have to make a noise. Everybody looks at me, especially the boys. My dad said time for homework and I just threw a fit. He sent me up into my room and thought I would submit. But I do not wish to stop it, not even if I could. Cause I’m going t...
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Version 3
16 Reviews   1 Comment
I was in my room, just playing, When I fell and hit my head. My mom called up from downstairs, “Quit jumping on your bed.” We finished with our supper, and I asked for dessert. Mom said “not tonight, dear, you put your peas inside your shirt” “Have you done your homework?” And I said "sure I did.” “What about that page of math, that in your book you hid?” I went upstairs to take a bath, where does she get her clues? How could she have known about the soap I didn‘t use? In the morning, when I...
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Children's / Prologue
I think this could be the start of a wonderful story for children, I do feel the urge to caution you though, not to go to "Harry Potterish" with it. I absolutely love this genre and think that your piece is off to a good start if you can stay away from that.
Humor/Satire / The Sandwich
So much fuss over a turkey sandwich. Very well written and funny piece. I found nothing to be critical of. Easy to read, punctuation looked right, no spelling errors. Good Job.
Humor/Satire / Defining English Words
Asphalt, joint custody, minimum, just a few of my favorites. Where do you get the imagination for this? Oh and by the way I have wanted to "reboot" my computer on several occasions! LOL Very nice job.