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AGE: 21
LOC: Brandon, FL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 06

My name is Courtney, I’ve been writing for years. My goal is to share my words in a book, to have my thoughts published. I’m open to comments and suggestions, feel free to write me.  

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Poetry / I Am...
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I am… I am filled with sorrows that will last a thousand years; I am covered with skin that won’t ever wrinkle from my tears. I am soaked with intelligence but still I didn’t know, I am an emotional person and I regret when letting anything go. Losing material love has brought me down but I know true love comes from above. I am shining star who carries love’s light, I am bold less being that runs when its time to fight. I am a confused beauty who thought I knew it all, I am an injured creatu...
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Short Story / The Light Is Green
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(A Journey for My Sister) “The light is green,” she always says to me. She says, “lets lay on the beach speak of bees and birds, Moving in fast conversation, while using the body language and short words. “It is still green,” she says “Come on lets dance in the streets, We will find ourselves laughing so hard my soul feels sore, Please agree to walk this path of life until neither of us can walk anymore. “ This is my sister. I do not know anyone with a heart more free and daring, Her presenc...
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / View of the Present
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In love I am a fisherman and if I could I'd through my lover back, because the main qualities he needs are ALL in the category titled "WHAT I LACK." When I think about my child sometimes I fear having sex, why are all the "boys" I come across so indecent and complex? If I had wings I think I'd fly to a place with deserted islands and forever oceans, so I could escape fear, pain and sex all of the devil's lil' potions. If a man tells me he needs me; he loves me and soon after is begging for s...
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Poetry / Deeper
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Into the pit of this earth, falling into my imagination parched with thirst. Deeper I plunge into these feelings without any advice, thrown against the walls toppling over twice. Dizzy and sickly I've tumbled and tossed, nose-diving into absolute happiness my vision is now lost. Deeper I fall tumbling and tripping over my words of denial and fear, these feelings in the pit of my stomach enable me to stop here. Farther into this beautiful set of mixed eyes I willingly fall, many times weak,ful...
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Romance / Like
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a butterfly with a touch of light,not hurtful nor a burden just pure and white. a single skip of heart, my love has shy confidence and won't change to hate if we ever break apart. Like a virgin full of faith, no matter what dies this love will continue live, never stingy, never without but fearfully forgives. Like a darkened fear that lies in the pit of my essence, a part of me needing you to walk throughout my life, feeding on your presence. Cotton soft like a kiss that just barely grazed yo...
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Humor/Satire / Top Ten Driving Tips
I feel it is very important for a reader to relate to the writer and i can relate to almost every sitaution. Sarcasm was great.. I got a chuckle out of this 10 all the way!
I like the choice of words that you used, it brings more light to the expression. The flow of this piece flows smoothly and the words help writers to relate. Good job.
Non-fiction / My Muse
I believe readers should be able to relate to the writer and as a poet I can understand the importance of thank you. I do agree that this piece can be used to inspire a writer. Regardless of the grammar issues as a reviewer, I think the overall flow & concept of this piece are good.
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / What I have become
It is very important for readers to be able to relate to what they are reading and I feel I can relate to your writing. The statements made also leave room for discussion, which i believe is also important as reader. Good Job.
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Don't Try
I like this piece for its realism, people can relate to that fear you write about. When a write can relate to its readers, they become famous. Good job.