pisceskat's profile
AGE:
25
LOC: Salem, AL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 16
LOC: Salem, AL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 16
I’ve been writing for my own enjoyment for years, but lately have gotten the idea in my head that others might enjoy reading what I’ve written as well. I’m hoping to get my first fantasy book published sometime within the next six months. It’s almost finished, but now its down to “Is it good?” That is where I hope Urbis comes in _ My close family and friends say it’s good, but you know how they can be about brutal honesty!
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Prologue Havendome Castle, Mordiva The scent of roses and jasmine was thick on the breeze as it blew carelessly through the open arboretum, playing gently with the vibrant petals and the verdant leaves, carrying along with it the hush of soft satin and a sweet lullaby. The sun was brilliant above, creating a soft halo of light around the mother’s mahogany hair as she smiled lovingly at the baby in her arms. Her dress was a light blue satin, a perfect match to her eyes, and it reflected up a s...
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Wow, this is weird but in a good way! It reminds me of the "House of Leaves" style of story telling, which is drawn to a very select reader set, I think. People who enjoy something different and new are going to love this, just as they'd like "House of Leaves", but the traditional, plain-jane readers who just want a straight forward story are probably not going to like it as much. But I think this is great material! Its creative, both stylistically and mathmatically(!). I love the character t...
I find it very interesting that on her seventeenth birthday, this girl found that she was invisible. The concept is wonderful, and it is an idea that many will be able to relate to. I liked how you began the story, directly giving me something of Ann Glenn to connect to. the flow of the story was good, and it was well told, but there is one issue that confuses me a bit. I'm not sure what a seventeen year old girl's motive is for going to a huge corporation to see the head honcho. Why would th...
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