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LOC: Sacramento, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 05
LOC: Sacramento, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 05
Welcome. Plotjuggler here. In case you have been writing the same book for the longest time and it’s still not good enough, or it’s far from completion, have patience. I’ve been working on (and playing with) the same novel for the past 22 years.
I have two babies. One is a 22-year-old spoiled brat I raised. The other is this book that should have left home a long time ago. RENDEZVOUS WITH A RUNAWAY. The actual events occurred when I was 24. It could be that I miss these characters so much that I continuously write about them, just to keep them dear to me. But I don’t miss the trouble. Even after all these years, there are aftershocks and occasionally, I still find myself glancing over the shoulder, or monitoring sh…
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With her marriage a pile of burned memories and her job a foul routine, the middle-aged botanist takes a vacation to a foreign country where she believes the Garden of Eden might have been located. She stops to admire an odd but beautiful plant on the side of the road. A thorn rips a vein on her wrist and she rushes to a local hospital. After the doc has fulfilled life-threatening preliminaries and leaves the room, she notices the wound is rapidly healing, and soon it’s only a scar. She ...
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DARK ELECTION – A black writer is connected with a political conspiracy after his best-selling novel “King of the North” corrupts the elections and the country plunges into civil unrest. BENEFICIARY—A con-artist preys on lives of the elderly while pretending to care for their needs. MAN OVERBOARD – A teenager joins a group of door-to-door advertisers and believes he has been abducted into an underground slave market. DEADBOLT – A chat line date leads to romance, a restraining order and murde...
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Sometimes an inconceivable scheme claims the life of a normal person. Todd, a mixed White and Puerto Rican eighteen-year-old H.S. graduate, sees an ad on a grocery bulletin seeking unattached, energetic personnel who would love to travel while distributing flyers. He passes an in-depth unorthodox interview along with a complete physical, consents to later have company profile pictures taken, and then joins a two-van group the next morning that relocates an hour from his home. He marvels at t...
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“Boy, you really had me going there for a minute. It took me a month to track you down. I almost—“ The large man slid forward in his seat, practically towering over the much smaller man. He laughed and a thin white paste of saliva oozed from each corner of his mouth. His powerful arms flew up and his face suddenly appeared deadly serious. “Wait a minute. Wait a minute. Stop looking all around. Forget about these people. Look at me, will you? Am I being too loud for you?” The small man’s head...
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“Look, this is great. But so far you’ve only shown us a paradise of young adults with nothing to do but play all day. Lord knows what goes on at night. Let’s get down to business.” “Right,” his wife said, placing an aging hand over her husband’s. “We were assured this was a retirement community. The best in existence. ‘The best money can buy’ the brochure said.” “A million bucks worth,” her husband said. “Where are the people our age? We haven’t seen one person over the age of thirty.” The y...
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Yes, this style of writing is different. It's new to me. However, likening the heartfelt destruction of a failing relationship to the continuous knawing attack by a rat is an analogy most readers can "feel". "It's just a pile of excrement" sounds correct for the ending.
This story teaches a necessary lesson in life. Rebecca understood that lesson. Be yourself and accept who you are, in spite of the world's changing facets and faces. Also, each one of us is unique in a different way. I appreciate the way you captivated my interest without any preaching. At the very least, you have succeeded in entertaining.
I cannot write poetry in any manner so I tread lightly here. Since some of this rhymed and I heard a faint tune, the word "direction" in the 4th line didn't seem to fit. This was only regarding "sound effects" and likely the meaning makes it the best word your intention. You painted a nice pic of rising above the stress of man and earth. Thanks for the short "vacation".
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