Wherever this belongs makes me no difference. It fits the genre of my mind just perfect. My writer's default . . . finds no faults.

It seems as though someone took the wrong turn, or followed the wrong dream. I like this piece because it made me step away from my own life and consider what someone else has to deal with. Thanks for the jolt.

I don't care whether you made these up or if you simply repeated some of them. I chuckled or laughed through all of them. You beat the ink out the Sunday comics.

I will say this swiftly. If I had my way I would change . . . nothing. The aura you created led me into the deeper places of my own mind--a strange, but safe place. Thank you for sharing this.

Thank you for sharing this. You have cleared up some gray matter in more than one area. All of your material makes sense. I understand now why some of my posted work has generated no interest or failed to promote much "hooting and hollering".

I like the connection between the two people and the association of eye, soul and emotion. Also, you stuck to your theme. Good job.

I cannot write poetry in any manner so I tread lightly here. Since some of this rhymed and I heard a faint tune, the word "direction" in the 4th line didn't seem to fit. This was only regarding "sound effects" and likely the meaning makes it the best word your intention. You painted a nice pic of rising above the stress of man and earth. Thanks for the short "vacation".

This story teaches a necessary lesson in life. Rebecca understood that lesson. Be yourself and accept who you are, in spite of the world's changing facets and faces. Also, each one of us is unique in a different way. I appreciate the way you captivated my interest without any preaching. At the very least, you have succeeded in entertaining.

Yes, this style of writing is different. It's new to me. However, likening the heartfelt destruction of a failing relationship to the continuous knawing attack by a rat is an analogy most readers can "feel". "It's just a pile of excrement" sounds correct for the ending.