SITTING UP AND DOING THE RIGHT THING TAKING CARE OF A FORGOTTEN CHILD TAKING SHIT FROM THE ONE WHO WAS WORTH IT ALL SETTING HERSELF UP FOR THE BIGGEST WATER FALL I PUT ALL I HAD IN TO THIS I TRY AND ITS SHES PISSED I AM SCARED TO FEEL LOVE OF ANY KIND BUT SOMEHOW SHE BEAT THE POETS MIND HER HEART IS PURE AS GOLD THATS WHAT MY WISE BRAIN WAS TOLD HER FACE THAT OF A ANGEL A PERFECT SMILE LIKE HER CHILD I JUST WONDER IF I CAN MAKE IT WONDER WHAT CAN KEEP ME ALIVE THE END OF THIS IS TO MASTERBATE...
last night I heard your voice drop like you was on top of the ladder then you heard what really matters you thought that I meant to stop like I knocked you of rung by rung like all we felt was oh so wrong I felt the trueness in your eyes I was waiting for you to be ready sorry for my past painful cries I was going fast and damn steady I don't want you to ever worry you are who I will finally marry I just want all to be perfect I love you and thats no secret I hate to hear fear in your voice I...
last night I heard your voice drop like you was on top of the ladder then you heard what really matters you thought that I meant to stop like I knocked you of rung by rung like all we felt was oh so wrong I felt the trueness in your eyes I was waiting for you to be ready sorry for my past painful cries I was going fast and damn steady
If you can't say it when your sober then never say it when you are drunk when your straight if you can't hold her then don't try when your in your funk If you feel you can't talk to someone then a drink will make it come undone when you feel on edge about confrontation then a bottle shouldn't be your realization you need the balls to be this way always don't ever be afraid to say what you say don't wait until the drunken day that makes others tend to stray if you come at someone in a haze the...
I was holding on to what gods says, but still I can't hold on to the way I was waiting to here his voice, feeling like I don't have a choice I was standing with the devil mixing the good with the evil there is too many days day go by too many times I just had to cry
I love this because I have a poem called fantasy in the rain that I have revised many times,to me there is nothing hotter than what I feel a storm can do to me.This may be way too much info but I never saved my self for marriage but I have saved my fantasy in the rain for the one.Sorry If that was too much to hear.Great wording,great poem
I think that your use of local spots is a great thing,alot of writers want to write real but leave out the surroundings that made them who they are.I also like the time of this story it hads a little history lesson of how things used to be and in some cases still are.I want to add you as a friend so I can read more of this.
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I think that you should add this I don't know yet what the rest is like but I really like this poem