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this was interesting, but the short play on descriptive words, left me struggling a little! knowing what you want yourself and how you read this, as you're writing it, does not automaticly mean that others will view it the same way.

i loved reading this poem, wel set out and such a great read, original in its portrayal, please lets have more of the same!

Yes i like this storyline, i would be really interested to read more

i fully understand what you're saying, in total agreement, we are now paying nearly $1.50 per litre here in the United Kingdom (England)