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LOC: East Pittsburgh, PA
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LAST LOGIN: July 19
LOC: East Pittsburgh, PA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 19
Rebekah Faith, author of “Picking up the Pieces” is an inspirational columnist. She works as a programmer; she moonlights as a singer, writer and is putting time in as the CFO of a startup pagan / gaming shop, and has just finished gutting and rebuilding a one hundred year old house. You can find samples of her other literary works and inspirational pieces at http://Forums.TurtleIslandPA.com, http://www.RebekahFaith.com and http://www.cafepress.com/rebekahfaith
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When "day to day" displaces dreams.
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Residual Effuary OK, what the frack is wrong with me? I'm still reeling from the month of "Eff"-uary: me being sick, closing the store. I just don't feel like I can deal with life anymore!! Or is it that I got my pay today? The whole month of March, I put in 33 hours. So this paycheck was for 16 hours. Yay! It's gone. Thank GOD my brother sent out the food and gas cards. Thank you brudder Jon! We really are going to need those to get through! I'm at work right now. I got in round about 1:30 P...
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Divining your true self: Divining 102 - Generalizations just won't do. Every one of us has had that moment of recognition (however fleeting) when we feel that there is something else, some kind of energy, magnetism, spirit force, or synchronicity that guides us. There are times when we say to ourselves, "It can't be just a coincidence!" Whether or not we believe that there is divine intelligence, or we believe that it is our inner consciousness that guides us, we find that we can't ignore the...
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Every once in a while we all get a little lost. Perhaps life sends you a series of blows that knock you off your kilter, perhaps you find yourself at the start of a new road in the new year, or perhaps you've just reached a benchmark in your life that leaves your head spinning while you wonder, "what's next?" During these times it can be helpful to take a moment alone with a pen and paper and re-focus. Who am I? What do I want? Are the things that are important to me, the same things that wer...
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The Elephant and the See-Saw (The Theory of Balance.) One universal truth that we all learned in elementary school is the theory of equilibrium. Later we may have learned how this theory applies to biology, chemistry, economics and physics, but it doesn't seem that anyone really told us how this theory applies to life. The easiest way to explain how the theory of equilibrium applies to life is to take a closer look at the patterns of weight loss in an individual. A person may diet for a week ...
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Again, great work. If you don't know Rebecca, you two have a LOT in common. http://blog.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=blog.ConfirmSubscribe&friendID=88850399 I could see the two of you getting together, pooling your resources and publishing a book of works. With all the POD services around these days, and in the world of myspace that whole "Agent" thing seems simply pointless to me.
Blessedly beautiful and brilliant! I truly felt some peace and harmony reading your words. Sumbit it! One tiny note: It was a little unclear to me right here- "Prayed saying Lord save you He said my child" Maybe it could be rephrased, or maybe it's just my ADD. ;P Lovely work!
By far one of the highest reviews I've given on this site. The only critique I can give is that the "..." is overused. No fault of yours: The a-typical attention deficit reader will tend to lose their focus around the C or T in addict, so you may want to add a "SLAP" right there. All in all, its simply well done and beautiful.
There is so much more that can be conveyed in the tragedy of losing oneself to fufill a goal, or losing oneself in the monotony, or losing oneself to appease another. This has a good theme, but the piece needs to be reworked. Lose the "quickie in the corner" bit. Or else revise the whole poem to have just as much ice and sharpness. I know your intent was to slap the reader and get their attention, but being the only line that digs, it does not have the support of its peers and loses its solo ...
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