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AGE:
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LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 05
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 05
I wrote a lot in college, took twenty years off to have a career in technology, get married, raise a family, etc. Then I came back to writing, and published my first book (Dusk Before the Dawn) in April 2006. I like to write both serious fiction, and what I hope will be comedic fiction (because what is funny to the writer often isn’t funny to the reader). I read almost all kinds of fiction and non-fiction.
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Seven words submitted on a scale of six words = over-achiever = trying to hard. I get it, it is clever. Will the Smith mag folks let it through their six word filter? Dunno.
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Good visuals: 1) the size of the wolves compared to the mounts; 2) the description of the Air Elemental (reminded me of Final Fantasy which I've watched my son play). Unsure: 1)the banter between Nathin and the fairy...they seemed more familiar and playful that I would have assumed this early in a story, but I have not seen Chapter 1. Dislikes: 1) some phrases stood out..."they spoke for several falls of the candle"...I didn't get this. Wax? 2)Nathin's promiscuity, i.e., "an excuse to see a c...
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