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AGE:
31
LOC: Denver, CO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 16
LOC: Denver, CO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 16
I have been writing since I figured out what a pencil on paper could do. My favorite poet is Charles Bukowski, and not just because everyone else likes him, but because he tells such great stories in a 15 line poem.
I don’t know why, but I really just hate rhyming poems. If I find one, please understand that I will not review it b/c I will have to give it a 1. Rhyming is ok, but to me at least, seems like a cop out. Think orange and move on.
I have my own website to promote my poetry:
www.prettygirlpoetry.com
I’m also completely addicted to MySpace. That’s how I found this.
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Jade was lying in bed, pulling the blankets tighter as she slept. Her arm reached out for Jon, but he wasn’t there and she woke up slowly. Jade checked the clock, 4:38 am. There was a moment of panic; Jon should be home by now, she thought. He was usually home by 2:30, 3 am at the latest. Remembering that it was Bobby’s birthday earlier in the week and knowing how talkative Bobby was would explain the lateness, but for Jon not to have called telling her that he was staying out late was a firs...
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upstairs, they fight and fuck all day and all night at 5:30 in the morning at 9:00 at night... squeek squeek squeek squeeksqueeksqueeksqueek five or six minutes, sorry buddy, it's the truth or they fight, voices clear loud and angry. please get over whatever it is and shutup and get a new mattress squeeksqueeksqueek how can you fight all night and squeeksqueeksqueek at 5:30 in the morning? even your couch squeeks you wake me up every morning, an hour before my alarm goes off squeeksqueeksquee...
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i've never been good at talking to people, they are always looking at me and i feel them judging me (even if they aren't). it's how i am, it's how my brain works. i can't have a 2 way conversation, i will answer questions when asked but i suck at saying "and you?" it is my biggest downfall. i cannot talk to people, this from the girl who got 2 A's in two different semesters of Interpersonal Communication in community college. what? yeah, A's for something i suck at. true i cheated when i took...
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I can remember the weight of his hand on my leg The touch of his skin next to mine How his voice stirred up so much So much excitement, desire, heat I can remember the taste of the wine The times we sat next to each other Our legs pressed tightly, jocking for position I can remember the smell His smell in the mornings before a shower The smell of a long night wrapped in each other’s legs. I can remember the touch of his hand on the small of my back His lips kissing my face gently The way our ...
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The first time you meet David is the day he walks into your shop. He came in during a lull; you are reading the comics from the newspaper you have delivered to the store every day. You say hello without looking up, and he wanders around the shop. You get up, forgetting that he is there, and go into the backroom to get a soda from the fridge. When you come back out he is standing at the counter. He has flipped the paper around and is reading your comics, and he was stunning. He looks up and m...
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click as in the internet or click as in a military term for distance? either way it works.
and blind in different reasons, and towards different things. could be that one is blind to ones-self or to things in someone or something else. i like this quote.
was thrown a little by the word "there" (meaning location), tried to make it "their" (possessive) and it worked better. i like the idea of the robots, taking over work like the beginning of the matrix (movies) idea. i want a robot, if only to do my dishes.
i love this quote. love it b/c it happened to me and i couldn't find a way to put it correctly. i love this quote.
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