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LOC: Oxford, MI
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 26
LOC: Oxford, MI
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: April 26
I am a 16 year-old girl. I have a small addiction to Mountain Dew…and by small I mean that if I don’t have any at least twice a day, I start to have withdrawl symptoms. Anyway, my poetry is an expression of my feelings. I took this stupid personality test that said I was an INFP personality type. That basically mwans that feelings rule over my life. The site told me that as an INFP, I don’t express my feelings verbally because I don’t want to burden others. It also said that I am more likely to write down my feelings into a sort of story that has no facts in it whatsoever. And I think I’m doing a pretty good job of it. So please enjoy the poems I have written. I hope to hear from you all.
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“Gweneth Rose! Get in the house this instant! Hurry up young lady.” Gwen dropped what she was doing instantly upon hearing her mother's voice. She leaned against the door way and crossed her arms. “Could you please not call me Gweneth? I absolutely despise it.” “Then what am I supposed to call you?” “Call me Gwen, or Rose. That’s what all the other adult’s call me. Or you could do what the kids do and just ignore the fact that I have a name and just call me ‘girl’, or something like that.” “B...
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12:35 PM - random Current mood: blah i still see your face in the moonlight looking towards the sky listening to the birds watching the reflections on the pond you turned around and faced me asking for the chance to take me from this place and find brand new romance a promise of forever was whispered and a ring was placed on my hand at that moment i was stupid enough to give all of myself to you of course i didn't think i reallt never have but now i'm starting to doubt our great secret plan t...
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You will get to wake up in the morning And get to tell him you love him But you won't, instead you'll tell him to go away You'll end up telling to stay out of your life And then the next thing you'll say is shut up But I get to wake up everyday now And see his picture on the mirror Next to the memorial from his funeral And I will wish that I had had more time And that he hadn't gone away so soon Now please don't give me your pity I just want you to know That you're taking your dad for granted...
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And get to tell him you love him But you won't, instead you'll tell him to go away You'll end up telling to stay out of your life And then the next thing you'll say is shut up But I get to wake up everyday now And see his picture on the mirror Next to the memorial from his funeral And I will wish that I had had more time And that he hadn't gone away so soon Now please don't give me your pity I just want you to know That you're taking your dad for granted And you don't care at all But that's y...
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The day I was born/you held me in your arms and whispered sweet words/that you protect me from harm/and you held me close to you/and sang words that were sweet and true Chorous: Darling I love you/and I will never leave your side/everyday that you grow up/I will live out the ride/and together we will be/our own happy family/baby I love you/and I will always be here for you in this life On the day that I turned four/you took ahold of my hand/and led me down the sidewalk/and played "catch me if...
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I didn't get the point, if there is a point. I think that this wouldbe an amazing rap song, if that's what you're into. But I think that there is alot of anger in this one and that maybe there is an underlying point that needs to come out. But it is pretty good.
Wow. I just want you to know that that was good. I mean, everything is good to me. But this poem right here was exceptionlly good. One of my friends would then tell me that there is no span of time and it happens in an instant. So that answeres the question at the end. Amazing.
That was so touchingly good. I think that this poem was really good. I have absolutly nothing that can or should be changed. It's good the way it is.
Wow. That was amazing. I mean, there isn't really anything I would change in it personally. I think there is a few spelling errors. But that's about it. I also could be wrong about the spellings. So, keep up the good work.
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