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AGE:
38
LOC: Richmond, KY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 28
LOC: Richmond, KY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 28
I am a 36 year old social worker who enjoys reading and writing in my spare time. I love most genre’s of writing, but my least favorite would have to be romance of the harlequin variety. I love a good mystery and thriller. If it makes me think or if it’s something fantastical, i’m usually hooked. I enjoy talking to people about things read or writing and would love the opportunity to get to know other writers. I am always open for constructive criticism as I know my writing has room to grow.
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Where is the laughter That once rang in my ears. The soft tender touch That wiped away my tears. The calm soothing voice That set my mind at ease. The gentle, caring look That I so longed to please. How could you leave me Alone in this night Without any hope Of an end in sight. The pain and the loss Unbearable at times. The frustrating torment That floods my mind. I want to reach out And touch you again. To hear the sound of your voice Or the caress of your hand. To stop the ceaseless crying ...
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Where is the laughter That once rang in my ears. The soft tender touch That wiped away my tears. The calm soothing voice That set my mind at ease. The gentle, caring look That I so longed to please. How could you leave me Alone in this night Without any hope Of an end in sight. The pain and the loss Unbearable at times. The frustrating torment That floods my mind. I want to reach out And touch you again. To hear the sound of your voice Or the caress of your hand. To stop the ceaseless crying ...
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Where is the laughter That once rang in my ears. The soft tender touch That wiped away my tears. The calm soothing voice That set my mind at ease. The gentle, caring look That I so longed to please. How could you leave me Alone in this night Without any hope Of an end in sight. The pain and the loss Unbearable at times. The frustrating torment That floods my mind. I want to reach out And touch you again. To hear the sound of your voice As it echos in my head. To stop the ceaseless crying That...
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very nice flow. Good rhyme and content. The emotion and the message is clear and concise. very nicely done! I found it easy to put a melody to the flow. Good luck in your writing career.
Good content. Didn't see any part that would qualify as a chorus. To me it seems a little rough on flow but a good message to get across.
Very nice. Excellent flow and content. As I read it, I found it easy to apply it to a melody. The emotion is clear and easily portrayable. Way to go!
Good draft. It definately has potential for something great. To me it was a bit choppy, but and a bit repeatitive with some words, but overall it's pretty good.
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