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AGE: 15
LOC: United States
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 01

I’ve been writing since I was six years old. I guess it’s just always been the one thing I really feel I am good at.
   Aside from writing, I love punk, emo, screamo, metal, and rock music.
     My fave quote is “I would rather be hated for who I am than loved for who I am not.”

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Young Adult / memoirs of a vegetable
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Memoirs of a Vegetable “So, do you really love him?” My friend Tracey Craigs asks me at lunch at Ian’s Diner in Trenton. We haven’t seen each other in a long time, me and Tracey. It is partly my fault, I suppose, for having my treatment stopped, therefore losing even more of my memory. Tracey - to think I’ve just recently remembered her. And we used to be best friends. She doesn’t know what I have become over the four and a half years we have been apart. I...
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Young Adult / A Broken Fairy
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 Dear Susanna,         A Broken Fairy is an uncompleted 62,261 word contemporary fiction novel set in Lake Falls, a fictonal town in Wisconsin. This novel is targeted mainly toward yound adults.       With absent parents and seperated-though-foster-care siblings, the life of Rogue Elle Orfanelli has never been easy. Given the name of a broken and abused fairy, Rogue has always felt she carried the name a little to...
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Young Adult / Untitled
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Introduction: New York University N.Y.U. College Application Essay Number One: Rogue Elle Orfanelli Who I Am Who am I? It is the only question I have never been able to answer on my own. I am my sister’s twin. I am my mother’s and father’s daughter. I am somebody’s worst enemy. I am another’s best friend. I am a teacher’s student and a probation officer’s juvenile delinquent. I am someone’s greatest mistake. I am my own worst enemy. I am my boy...
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Young Adult / Untitled
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Introduction: New York University N.Y.U. College Application Essay Number One: Rogue Elle Orfanelli Who I Am Who am I? It is the only question I have never been able to answer on my own. I am my sister’s twin. I am my mother’s and father’s daughter. I am somebody’s worst enemy. I am another’s best friend. I am a teacher’s student and a probation officer’s juvenile delinquent. I am someone’s greatest mistake. I am my own worst enemy. I am my boy...
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Vinnie My baby sister, Claire Bear, called me today. I was at the airport, not to be yet again deployed to Iraq, but to meet a friend and fellow soldier named Buddy Henshee, on his way home from war. Buddy was only nineteen, but he didn’t have any family to come home to. His old man, an army captain, had been a killed due to being the victim of hate crime in his own home fifteen years ago, when Buddy was only three , and his mother had died of heart failure a few years before that, when Budd...
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Novel Treatments / HEADLESS CHICKEN(CH.2)
In fact, they never mentioned her at all, even after I returned from Arizona. - not sure why this would make a difference, that he returned from AZ Before I decided to kill her, I longed to be like her - this is very powerful. i didn't see it coming. melded - molded may fit better.. not much emotion or background story going on here. i'm not I understand it all. i don't think this flows very well at first, with her saying his name at every end of each sentence. too repeptitive. i'm interested...
wow. this is so so beautiful. it really makes you think about life and death, about afterlife.. this is so powerful. well done. i really can't complain about anything, but maybe a few more verses touching on the background of who these characters are would nice. have you ever thought of transforming this poem to a short story? i bet it would be a good one, since you've put such heartfelt emotion into this poem. i really loved it. it is very publishable. well done, again.
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Short Story / He Says...
He says, your smile is like barbwire that cuts my deep into my soul Oh, green eyed murky river you run cavernous and cold The more I look into you, the further I sink, I have loved you so long I have forgotten how to think. this is so powerful and amazing. i'm very jealous of this writing, especially this one excerpt above. well done. you convey emotion so deeply. first off, the beginning is very emotional and sweet. it immediately pulls in the reader and leaves them wondering what may have h...
interesting about the mexican heritage. but to make this flow along a bit smoother, you may think of, rather than marking the facts by 1, 2, 3, and so on, incorporating them into your story as you go along. i'm not sure I understand the character of abuelito. he is so different when you describe his feelings in politcs {wanting equality} to when you describe him in his own home {as a dictator} honestly, it seemed as if I were reading about two different characters, not only one. it would also...
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