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AGE: 30
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 15

Hello people,

I used to write years ago, even got a few odds and sods published. Stopped writing when real life got in the way.

Just trying to get my voice back at the moment.

I hope nothing I write offends.

Oh and am English, in case your wondering.

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Poetry / Sleep
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I only sleep in your arms now, So this week I won’t sleep at all. I’ll lie awake and dream of cuddles Of kisses , of hugs , of snuggles, Of you; my love, my everything.  
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I was going to write a masterpiece But I had vodka instead, So I curl up in worthlessness, Silenced again  
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Short Story / Daddy
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Daddy It’s cold out here. The frost has collected on my tail like a dusting of icing sugar, but still I don’t move. It sparkles in the distant light from the street below, my glittering tail the only thing that marks me out from the exhaust-fume blackened stone work. The window ledge is freezing to touch; it leaches out what little warmth is left in my hands and feet. I don’t move though, not yet. If I press my face to the glass, I can feel a little warmth from inside; even hear a little soun...
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Walking to the off-licence, I see someone vanish on the edge of sight, thin white teenage arms. Before I enter, a man of milk chocolate spice enters. As I move round the shop, I avoid contact, his darkness is sweetened by the luxury of his peroxide hair. Sweet cinnamon coloured leather coat. As I leave, a large sweet man holds the door, blue and white striped curtsey. Outside thin girl lighting a cigarette. Hair dark as the night, skin as light as the lemon street light, my consumptive Aphrod...
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From a mistress to a wife. If you knew, would you care That we’re loving him in time-share? One night with you, one night with me I’m touching you by proxy.
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Poetry / frugal bastard
great, liked this alot! Not sure about the use of the word sauntering though. Made me smile anyway.
Short Story / See-Saw
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Beautiful imagery. You should go to pompei. "aristocratic assets" sounds a little too modern in my opinion though.
Sums up the tensions you can get on a building site (worked on a few myself) very well. Bit about the regulation of the radio rings very true.
Tense seemed fine to me. The twist of the baby was quite good, perhaps you could elaborate on that a bit more. Though that the scrubbing hands reference was a bit cheesy though.
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