Yeah it's good. I get the idea that a writer always doing their craft but it is not the best quote ever.

Love It. Really Truthful.

Wow. It was somewhat dark but also pretty humorous. I was not that surprised that Michelle did not kill Rod because even though she wants that renewed excitement in life she understands that Rod would not stop her because he loves her and she wants a sort of struggle from him. For the title how about "Anything but the Same Thing" or "Unchanged Life". About what is missing, I could not really feel that anything was. I liked it.

There are only two problems I can see. One is with the line "As ordered did something that they considered productive, take shots at a bar." I am guessing you just forgot to add the word they before did. The other is that you put know indication that El was reaching to shake Cam's hand. Overall, I like it and can see that the two ex partners working together is probably going to be funny and interesting.

I am sorry. The cold-hearted machines called government and politics do not understand that falling in love for another person is not a choice. That instantly loving a person cannot be forced so they should not assume it could be. I hope that your husband and your future is better.

This is one of my favorites espeially since I have been felling this way alot. Very good use of words.

I beat you a lot people feel this way. It is hard to reflect on ones self because what you see most of the time is not easy to deal with. I do not feel people think this way because of what is there but because of what societal standards say should be there. I do not know though that is just me.

This actually was helpful. Now that I think about it, I do not usually review my friend’s works I think I am going to go do that. I completely agree with the section on titles anything that says "untitled" I almost admittedly skip it. Titles are supposed to be what gets me to look and the word untitled does not make me want to look. Thanks for writing this I am going to start making sure I do most of these things.

It is very simply put, but still holds lots of truth.