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AGE: 26
LAST LOGIN: December 22

Quantum02 also known as Marcus Dupree lives in the Seattle area in a little apartment.  His interests include: writing, music, and movies.  He hopes one day to be ballsy enough to perform his songs in front of a crowd.  Until then, he is quite comfortable hiding in front of a computer.

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Poetry / Perfect Mate?
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Shall I kiss away your woes 'Till All matters decompose Let the answer be my role And always take right approach Become your cherished accessory Little trinket for your guests to see Do you think it would cause stress for me to be part of your destiny? Would you throw me away if I get out of shape or out of form? Would you let me slip away if my grips get a little worn? Would you lose me in the mists if my light is no longer warm? Call my condition mint while my body is tattered and torn? I c...
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Poetry / Gone
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It's so sweet in how it makes you lose your way Makes you think about that person everyday You're so sick with love's grip and then it's gone Losin' focus while you're floating in my mind Made me open, ready to devote my time Willing to swallow lies and then gone Your habits just become memories I wonder if you ever was in love with me It's like you had enough of me... forgone How did infatuation melt away my walls? How did your actions made me wait for your phone calls? How could I feel such...
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Short Story / Final Moment
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An unexpected sigh escaped the lips of the hostage, finally realizing his troubling predicament. He searched the room, eyes rolling up and down, as if he were trying to find reason in some hidden spot. He knew that reason did not exist in the soul of his vigilante; 'one would have better luck finding rationale in mayhem', he thought. He stared at the attacker from across the room, fearing the notion of speaking to him. He decided, however, to breathe rapidly in a feeble attempt to communicat...
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Lyrics / Career End
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Born with my head lopsided Conditioned with a fate unknown Reformed yet I decided to be positioned to make my goals You believe that I am selfish Only looking out for me When I support you I am helpless Suffercating me while you breathe Chorus Sorry to hurt you but its said truly Gotta stop healin you Just gotta do me As I make my travels I see through my rugged road alone Had to make company with the gravel See the true beauty of the stones You believe that I am selfish Only looking out for ...
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Poetry / Untitled
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Products of Falsehoods Look what the streets begot Your promise its all good When you live where evil be at Born into poverty that segregation started And its manufacturers will have to answer for The problem of the nation, our youth is highly regarded Could it be that our failure is what our elders had in store? Tradition lays with the relationship: cause and effect Now is not that the responsibility of the troublemakers is exempt but the works of the past relates to the state of the current...
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From reading, I found the poem to be a strong snapshot of innocence and growing up. The lines are short, yet powerful in their message. I wouldn't change anything. Nice work.
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This piece is a very nice read. The sentences flow well together, and the word choice is superb. I also enjoyed the idea of research being the main subject. We do use it quite it a bit in writing. I did think that the paragraph that contained the long list of different subjects used in research was a bit much. I got your point, but maybe you can shorten the paragraph a bit while still maintaining the humor. I like the Genius concept used in the writing as well. Smart approach and well-written...
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Interesting idea and approach. I have read poems about loved ones being killed or dying, but never by a lion. Some of the word use sounded odd, like "convert my eyes." Overall, an enjoyable work.
Poetry / Almost
I think that this poem is a great start. I thought it was cool because we all grab a pillow wishing it was a warm body next to us. A couple of more verses and it could be a heartbreaker of a poem. I gave it a six merely because of the length issue. But for what it is, I like it.
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