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AGE: 29
LOC: Memphis, TN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 01
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CHAPTER ONE--AALIYAH DUNBAR On the outside, I was a voluptuous, sexy, young, and a very smart second year law student at The University of Memphis. Standing 5’11 and a hundred and seventy-two pounds, with the pounds all falling in the right place I know how to work it. My brown milky skin and long straight hair made me desirable to many men, but never approachable. I learned at an early age how to use the one thing that I had left of my mother to get what I wanted. My body! I had a sexy and c...
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CHAPTER 6—ANTONIO JONES A.K.A TONY Antonio Jones A.K.A Lil Tony was twenty-four years old, five nine and a hundred and seventy five pounds. Being brown skinned with a low hair cut and flashy made him a hit with the ladies. He was a pretty boy/thug mix and that drove the ladies wild. He had his choice of women at any given moment. But none of them was ever good enough to warrant a commitment from him. He got in tha game at seventeen and now at twenty-four tha game was paying off. He had learn...
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Children's / Child's Lullaby
it sounds very soothing especially to a crying baby. i really liked the last line letting the baby know that you'll always be near is very comforting to a small child. great job keep up the good work hope to see more from you.
this really captures the mind of a ten year old child. it was really funny and yes maybe a little disturbing but a ten year nonetheless.
Children's / Mud And Puddles
i enjoyed this piece i could envision the pictures in this story makes a nice story for four to five year old children. at that age the love rain, mud and puddles. keep working on it. it needs a problem that the child is able to overcome. that is just my opinion.
excellent book and idea. everything fits seamless together i could actually see this story unfold. the special glow around shapes and colors are great idea but i wounld add the arrows though, because the child that is reading the book will want point out the shapes and colors themselves to show that the are ready just like Ryan.
i am begining to look for bb and sissy. but anyway this is a great story to help five and six years understand illness and the effects in their own langauge. keep writing.
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