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AGE:
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LOC: Australia
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 26
LOC: Australia
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 26
hi im rachel im 31 from australia im easy going,honest,friendly and fun.I love poetry,writing,music,drawing.Alot of my poetry that ive written is i guess a little morbid,sad,depresive,but i do have a very different selection.So anyway i hope you like them.thanks..
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My song i wrote .FALLING. ..CHORUS.. Cause I could see you falling, You jumped with all that pain, Didn't you hear me calling, I was screaming out your name, As time goes by , I still sit and cry, Thinking about the day I found you, You were by the cliff face, Overlooking the whole place, You never knew I was behind you, You were starring up at that sky, And i was wondering why, You were asking god to forgive you, But as quick as the breeze, You fall upon your knees, By then I new I had to ho...
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RELEASE Bury these chains that lock me inside bury the shame i can no longer hide open the doors open my eyes gide me the way show me the light if that doesnt work then bury my soul dig me a trench and put me in that hole forgiveness i shall prey my pain shall now release leave me there to rot cause now my souls at peace BY RACH
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MY Reflection To look at you in the mirror, To see the waste you are, The bitter sadness in your eyes, The pain that has left a scar, I hear the demons in your head, I feel the wrath you try hide, The loveless look upon your face, Not knowing whats going on inside, Clinched fist you hold so tight, The power of all that pain, What caused you to be so angry, What drove you to be insane. BY RACHEL
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REMEMBER Do you remember what i told you when you were just a little girl i said be carefull when you grow up be weary of this world dont take anyone for granted trust only in yourself love the ones that love you and always look after your health spend time with the lonley help the ones who are sad never think of you worst days remember the great one's you had By Rach
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......HELP ME DRIFT...... Close my eyes and send me to sleep Cause I forgot my duties that I failed to complete For what they were I'll never know My mind is so tired so just let me go There was never a point for my existance For I'm just a mear shaddow lost in the distance Locked away never to be heard, Not having a reason to ever mutter a word Just lost in all thats forsaken All memories and dreams just keep on breaking For theres nothing left pure in thy heart Just pain and sorrow all tor...
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i really liked this one.The wording was good and i thought it was quite clever.I look forward to reading more of your work.
Wow that was a nice piece.I enjoyed it the words were nice the story felt real i liked it good work
i liked this poem more towards the ended it came out good like to read more of yours
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