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AGE: 22
LOC: Fairmont, WV
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 11

I am a serious writer who has the dream of being one of America’s favorite story tellers. I have written two novels so far and Im working on my third. I am attending AIU Online for my PhD in Psychology. I am a published author. I am currently working on my second book and this is why I am here. I am in the editing phase of the publishing. So, I look forward to all the reviews and help.

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Young Adult / Silenced- Chapter Two
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5 Reviews   6 Comments
Chapter 2 The walk was a lot longer than I had expected. I wasn’t used to having a bus stop. Back in my hometown, the bus stopped outside of my house. I didn’t have to calculate the time because the bus driver knew to wait for a few minutes. I told him that with the cold weather I would be watching for him in my living room window. He didn’t mind about that. I climbed onto the bus and looked at the other kids trying to find an empty seat. There wasn’t one. I started m...
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Poetry / Finding Love
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6 Reviews   5 Comments
I once knew a girl that didnt know where she was going, She got on the computer whithout even knowing That this was the day her life would change the messenger came up and she typed in her name It felt like forever for the messenger to sign in And this is where it all began She was bored and didnt know what to do and then she went into the chat room She asked the guys to come and talk And this began the very long walk Boxes popped up left and right Most of them she clicked out of sight All bu...
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Short Story / Johny at the Hospital
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First I want to say that this is intense and I love it. The details are very broad and the reader feels like they are there watching the characters. The emotional appeal of the story is great. This definately keeps the reader interested and wanting more. I like how thoughts are distinct and stand out from the rest of the writing.
Young Adult / A Littluns' Truth
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