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AGE: 24
LOC: Campbell, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 04

I am a sexy vixen with flabby legs and long blonde hair. My eyes are shards of blue glass that kill flies. And my lips crack and chap stick is the only remedy for my lack of moistyness. I also have a lovehandle that helps me float in the pool, so no need for water wings.

I am also a poet of non-famous fabulous interest that has take 3 left turns and too many right ones in wanting to serious her career. Spoken out against fat free ice cream and why aren’t drugs legal?

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  Every tear boils in the pot, the hair sticking to my face, my eyes close, feeling the heat, every breath tingles with herb magic…   The gimpy hag mutters wicked curses under her breath “It’s all your fault…it’s all your fault…” Her knife notes soak through, leaving melodies cold and wretched in the steam. Freezing to the center, dying and stiff, my sister is a raw caged chicken crumbling away with her every toothpick finger prick, b...
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Short Story / Are you happy?
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Bare white walls reflect the yellow glow of a clock-radio, 1:43 AM. I’m holding my knees, listening to the new creeks and groans of neighbors up, down and in between our apartment. “Sweetie…” I look at Gabe, he just groans and cuddles closer to the edge of the bed. 9:22 AM Thump, thump, thump… Flipping through a magazine a floating mix of tighty whities, twisted bras and gym socks shake in a toxic concoction of Method detergent and bleach. ‘Shopping for a bridal dress can be an enjoyable expe...
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Poetry / Human Wolf
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Onto the hunt hear my cry into the night of the moonless sky. I want to join with the wolves and taste the blood of a fresh kill. Fear that runs bring me strength I have no time for holding back. The mind is free as my gentle tone that dances with trees when they’re alone. Water splits beneath my feet as I travel on the chase. Spirit be swift, soul be strong, for within this night a death shall be born.
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Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Congratulations are in Order
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The plan was to head over to my boyfriend’s, Brian’s, work, Petco, and celebrate our 8th anniversary together with all of his co-workers, who I don’t know. I was kind of bummed out because I really didn’t want to meet anyone new, especially on our anniversary, I asked, “Why are you doing this on our anniversary? It’s supposed to be for us.” Brian just smiled, “Well, the truth is, I kind of lied….I’m kidnapping you.” He held up a blindfold. Taking me out of the store I saw Angel, Sherman and M...
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Poetry / Make Believe
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Looking through the pictures all filed away, collecting dust, memories decay and I sit down, remeberin ice cream and Togos. I’m achin and rub my eyes until I can go to sleep. Falling into a heavy bed, Clutching my pillow tight, retouching on every night: we laughed, we played, we fought and forgave; crawling with memories. Tears hit the flower pillow case I see glowing stars from the pain flowing through my eyes making everything wet. I thump the bed with a fist, turning around, I lie awake s...
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Novel Treatments / F%#@-Up Fairytale Chapter 1
I laughed out loud at the beginning. Your story is witty, fun and amusing. It's like you took Shrek, Hoodwinked, and some twisted imagination to put together an interesting vision of a fairy tale. I love the thought of a Villain Union and a Nice Spell to test their malicious intent. However, when your main character first speaks I would clarify who he is speaking too, I understand it's not the teenager, but it is unclear. Also, when you use parentheses to further describe the loony locations,...
Poetry / Cuulmore Lane
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Poetry / Love
Love is an emotion. You have some great images here, I can almost imagine what love looks like, but it isn't quite there. Because love is only a concept taken from the mind and feelings it produces, you as the author have a chance to give it a face. I can almost see the emotional villain in your work, but it falls short in the end because I'm left without a powerful image to understand why you would rather do without love. So, the real question is why would you want to do without love when yo...
Sci Fi & Fantasy / A Sacrifice of Self: Chapter 5
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