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Originality of voice (1 item)
Authenticity (1 item)
I've written truth, (1 item)
To pleasantly surprise a few people that are used to finding some pretty crappy poetry on this site. (2 items)
Freshness (2 items)
Karim/Michelle interaction (2 items)
Michelle Pillar (French woman) characterization (2 items)
Karim thought sequences--effective to show his state of mind and level of concern, as well as his increasing attraction and posessiveness toward Angel? (2 items)
Is Karim's stress level and angst over Angel portrayed effectively? (2 items)
One more--is Karim to "gushing" in his thought sequences about Angel? (1 for no, 10 for ye (1 item)
Karim dialogue and thought sequences - overall (1 item)
Angel dialogue - overall (1 item)
Does reader understand why Angel comes on (1 for yes, 10 for no) (1 item)
Does this scene make Angel less likable (1 for yes, 10 for no) (1 item)
Does this scene make Karim less likable as hero (1 for yes, 10 for no) (1 item)
Is it clear to reader that Angel also feels for Karim, but has many more reservations? (1 item)
Is it clear to reader that Karim has fallen in love with Angel and that it's no longer just about sex for him? (1 item)
Angel coming on to him to make her point? (1 item)
sexual tension beween characters (1 item)
Angel's reaction to Karim (1 not effective, 10 effective) (1 item)
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