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Poetry / Lord of the Dark
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Night at last the vicious sun has gone to sleep the blue sky faded to black the twinkling stars appear like angels watching the city feeding time again i am the King of the Night the Lord of the Dark i rule the streets at night feeding on the evil here i am god the people on the streets my cattle they disappear people scratch their heads but no one misses them much my little meals on legs scum of the earth the dealers and pimps thugs and thieves no one will miss them my cattle worthless waste...
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i just stopped by for a drink like a dozen times before i guess i was more thirsty than i thought once i got her on the floor as i quenched my insatiable thirst i came to realize this girl that i was preying on was just about to die as i came to my senses i saw her in my arms this vessel i called friend a victim of my charms and soon she would be gone because of my mistake and the Prince would have my head did i deserve this fate? i could not let her die the regrets would never stop and so i ...
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Poetry / alone
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and so i'm alone again leaning on friends that are mere masks of mine enemies and they smile at me and pat me on the back concealing their cold pointy daggers and i fall asleep and i dream and the sky falls in and it hits me on the head i bleed and still i'm alone and i'm cold and i light a fire and i burn my arm tho flesh is gone and only tendons and muscle are left beside bone and my arms fall off and still i'm alone and the storm comes and it carries away my tent and the rains come and soa...
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Poetry / the lawman
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He rode into town one hot summer day soaked with sweat from riding the range his horse was white a palomino his gun was silver his bullets gold his hat ten gallons his vest held a badge "MARSHALL" it said he lived on the edge his draw was like lightning his gun his best friend when he found a villain its career would end his name was Art Laws he stood for the law he protected the weak! did i mention his draw? he came into town with a warrant in hand. to arrest a villain who had killed 30 men ...
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Children's / Billy Goat gets Lost
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Billy Goat was a playful fellow he loved to play outside one day when Nanny Goat looked away billy went to hide he ran into the woods that day and soon could not be found he ran deep into the brush as far as he could go, then he stopped to look back when he couldnt run no mo-- he saw no one had followed him and billy goat just smiled- they'll never find me now he said i lost em by a mile then billy looked around and saw some tall grass growing near so billy started eating and when he eats he ...
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Poetry / Inside Out
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wow. i like that. it paints quite a picture. nice flow. easy to read and very descriptive.
Poetry / Nine Numbers
interesting. easy to read. good question at the end. i dont think it is recycled, but maybe when they run out... or maybe the first ssn was 001. just kidding. could use a ? at the end.
Novel Treatments / The Truth About Dragons
an interesting story. the battle for chastity she puts herself through is adnirable. i imagine she is to become a nun or something and her former lover wants to help her make the transition by denying her his affections. an admirable move for him as well. but i dont get the feeling from this that he has any suppressed desires for her. maybe he is turned off to the thought of being with a nun-to-be or is he just turned off by her in general? that is the question in my head.
Poetry / Alive
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