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AGE:
99
LOC: Deltona, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 21
LOC: Deltona, FL
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: July 21
I like to read. Ilike to write. I love the ladies…I hope they love me too.
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DRIVERS LICENSE Magnificent morning following the turbulent nights impenetrable darkness……. Pierced by the suns intense light .With a sense of renewal and a cleansing of dread, as I…… Examine the contents of the words that were said. Contributions to destruction or installments in hope. Stretching lifelines to connect … stretching towards you in hope. To reach, To another, to reach, to your heart….. To reach to my sister The love affair starts. To gather all I can, to consume all I need, To ...
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Even a fool.... when he holds his tongue is counted wise. just words old words still acknowledged to be true.....unless that fool with holds information from you. How can you measure when prudent becomes vain. Is a rose still a rose by any other name? The way to a destination imagined or real physical or mythical allways shaded by hills. The valleys not hospitable.....nor barren, just so. Just a path to your goal....the direction of flow. The laws of gravity.....The ways of the heart. We call...
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REAL America Try to imagine if you would.......I'd be like you if I could. I'd walk a million miles in your shoes..... maybe then I'd know ...what you...who you....go to. Evening breezes to soothe your mood or is it me? Hot summer days to inflame your sensibilities.... or is it me? I look and I hear, I see. Is it me? I nod and I hear....I try. Yet the reason......eludes my eyes....but I try. I admire at times...but pity is the rule, For my wildest dreams crave solitude...... You And my heart ...
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This poem is saying to me. GO FOR IT. cliche blood sweat and tears..come with the territory. But some give up after one failed attempt this is profound. You must truly live in a place where hockey sticks are standing together frequently. This poem is actually good. But shallow thinkers need to read it several times and begin to think......about reality. Hunger is whats needed to truly come to this work. I give it a 8 its pretty darn good.
I love the way you think. Your use of language is awsome. the flow is superb. Its easy to read and simple to understand. There is only one place where I slowed....."but haven't yet to ask the questions"..... why the contraction? But have yet to ask the questions? all in all one of the best poems I've read to date on this site including my own,I am officially your fan
cryptic but clear. Its poetry ans symbolism. I get some of it and thats enough. As for universal appeal I dont see it.
me. I am. a donor of life. your work echos a new awareness. I feel you gave away to much to clarify your metaphors. they had their own meanings within what you said and what it appears you wanted to say. Keep tryin. Your voice is mixed.
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