rebel310's profile

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AGE: 18
LOC: Inglewood, CA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 07

Hey whoevers readin this my names Rob
i write Songs and tell more like essays or articles on what im trying to say. im not the best at spelling so if im wrong please correct me.

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Lyrics / Violence
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3 Reviews   13 Comments
Violence in The Streets Violence everwhere i look Violence in my head Why do we fight? i dont know why. I turn and see. Violence in the streets Violence everywhere i look violence going out of my head i will not fall for this game there is no winner whats the point get the voilence out of here!
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Lyrics / Parents
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3 Reviews   6 Comments
Parents always jumping on my back please just shut up i know you take me for a fool im not your fucking tool im know im not great but its also not my fate i turn my back bitch bitch bitch you say you know what best for me ever done a thing with me sayin this and that herd it all before god dam i walking out the door
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Lyrics / No drugs for me
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4 Reviews   7 Comments
No drugs for me I still want to breath Make your lungs black now i know your whack drugs just another thing i dont need i got better things to do but its fun to you sniff glue drink beers something i dont fear i just know inside i dont need it call me a sqare if you dear just know i hear you so
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Burn your countries flags Fuck your patriotic pride Fuck the politicians and the shit they try to hide They make you pay their taxes and they make you fight their wars But they won't feed the hungry and they don't care about the poor Instead they try and take you for all your fucking worth And they separate with flags all the people of the earth They exploit our different cultures and enhance our sickening greed And they get the hatred rising which is exactly what they need But what about the...
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Poetry / When I look back
its good very good to be published in a book most likley you could turn that poem into a whole story
Haiku/Senryu / Crash And Burn
hmm im guessing how someone could pretend to be you copy one and well theres your identity gone mabey conflcit could happen its good
Lyrics / Cut
hmm emo i would say no? those are not lyrics its could not go into a book and could not be admired for it could be understood to those who go around cuting them selves for but realy what does it solve
Horror / Child Ghost
hmmmm if u extended it its good to go for a short story in a book great for childeren also adults who love these type of stories good way of explanin your nightmare
its good and you dotn need to rhymn to make a good inpact in a poem kudos!
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