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MEDIOCRE WORDS WHITE LINES ON WHITE PAPER MONOCHROMATIC EXPRESSIONS FILL PAGES OF EMPTINESS EVEN AND UNBENDING LIFE’S COURSE IS FILLED WITH SUCH MONOTONE THOUGHTS MEDIOCRE WORDS WITH GHOST LIKE IMAGES CARESS OUR MINDS DAY AFTER DAY WE DRIFT ACROSS A UNIVERSE OF GREY AFRAID TO TAKE A CHANCE AFRAID OF FALLING AFRAID OF FAILING WHAT CREATES A LEGACY MONEY POWER BEAUTY OR THE POWER TO INSPIRE OTHERS TO BE GREAT WE LONG TO LEAVE SOMETHING BEHIND THAT WHICH CREATES THAT WHICH AROUSES THAT WHICH IG...
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FIRST KISS NEW BEGINNINGS SOFT REMEMBRANCES TIMELESS PASSION IN ALL ITS SINCERITY A KISS IS ETERNAL AS LIGHT FLOWS INFINITE SIMPLE YET COMPLEX A MOMENTARY EXPRESSION WHICH LASTS FOREVER AND SO THE JOURNEY BEGINS LIQUID AND SERENE GENTLE SMILES SOFT AND INVITING FANTASY TAKES BREATH ANTICIPATION SINGS DESIRE FLOATS UPWARD SHYNESS FADES PASSIONS CARESS ARMS REACH OUT HANDS EXPLORE FINGERS INTERTWINE FLESH EMBLAZONED BODIES IMMERSED EFFORTLESS SATISFACTION MOUTH GROWS FULL BREATH MOIST WITH LIP...
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words float outwards liquid energy shimmers
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words float outward the sun blossoms
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lovely words i can picture everything your words are very passionate and you leave the reader with a wonderful picture. my only critique i would say is get rid of the word chipper. thats a very preppy word and your words are alot more passioante than that the only other critique i would say is i desire to hold her breasts i think the word breasts takes away from the passion again and makes the women seem like an object. to me for a better flow for lust and passion what about just saying i des...
WOW i liked this one you said think of a painting what i saw in my minds eye was a an empty white house. outside the fall harvest but this beautiful white house has secrets lonely secrets wanting secrets there is person behind those windows but the windows are shaded black or grey there is no way to see out of this sad house or even feel anything outside this house. what a jail. nice writing robin
i liked this very light very airy i can picture someone working on a piece on a sulit afternoon] very nice my only critique would be to choose a different word then toiling its doesnt roll off the toungue as much as the other words very cool robin
YOU COULDNT HAVE SAID IT ANY BETTER I LOVED THE WORDS STILL WAITING AND STILL UNWRITTEN SPEAKS VOLUMES
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