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This is the best thing i've read in a while. Don't believe me? Read the reviews I've done. I don't play. Bravo. You have written a poem worthy of study (and i don't mean technique, but themes!). Thank you. It makes me want to read the novel. Isn't that what a poem should do? It's my type: animate, linear, rich. It reads differently the second time bc I'm looking for clues on the sentiments of an addict and of lost love. So, into this I'm factoring the narrator's constriction by the upscale ti...

i hope that her "neck" of the woods, or i mean hills -- i am hoping that hills means breasts. "strange things begin"? this whole thing isn't very clear. but i've never reviewed something like this before, a "story idea" i guess. yet i just read it two or three times, the whole thing. vampire stories aren't very original, but i guess there's a whole world of readers, and i guess that you have some original themes within that world, such as loving forever. what does it mean "connected" to the K...

This is a good new perspective from another character's viewpoint. Again the writing is lean and vivid. Still I'm not crystal clear what the heart of the story is -- I don't expect us to be there yet, and nor does it have to be spelled out (and yes I should apply this to my own writing) but while I'm enjoying the Telling I'm not sure enough why it's being told. It is colorful enough to keep me interested, (almost). There is a hook missing. What are we headed toward? I perused your first chapt...