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AGE:
32
LOC: Baltimore, MD
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 31
LOC: Baltimore, MD
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: October 31
if you get there before i do, pull me up.
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Version 3
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Original: six MILLION words; re-revising; forthcoming!
Version 2
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Original: six MILLION words; re-revising; wait!
Version 1
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When I considered why, I didn't immediately remember the statistic, which is odd, since I was the one, in many a group of guys, who would casually ask, "Would you do it?" It was strictly hypothetical discussion. Would you do it if that unremovable condition were somehow removed? That was the silly question. And when they all implied, with quiet smiles and headshakes, that they were not part of the ninety-five percent who reportedly said they would in fact do it, of course I didn't believe th...
Version 1
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+Around the Block+ Some white guy named Steve would be leading the community cleanup this morning. I walked there with the usual subtle alertness and quiet hope which I carried for this broken old neighborhood. It was three blocks deep and ten blocks long. It was on the city's south side, thus commutable down to the capital, so it was getting a push from builders. They were hoping to attract new buyers to these trash-covered blocks. ----- There was no getting around it: the trash came from tr...
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this is strong characterization of you. it makes me consider your artistic gifts and inclinations. it's poetic - the sensitive senses; of course it's redundant too tho', when you are trying to maximize word usage. i also wonder whether you've struck any universal chords w this, or instead will appeal only to those who appreciate the particular ilk you've described. i'd love to read the novel!
you've mixed languages; what are we supposed to think about that exactly? it does give you breadth. there's a lot of self-promotion in this. i like the confidence. Essentially you want us to think that these six words even flow strong and keen. Good luck!
not sure i get it but let me spend some time analyzing. are we addressing Writers/Artists as the competition directs? well, we are certainly dreamers!! But you say we are dreams. So maybe some others are simply conjuring us up and we're not real? Maybe you're not discussing artists at all but just humanity? I'm trying. Sorry if I'm way off.
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